Ha! No one has yet commented on the ultra appropriate and perfect use of blank space in this piece. At least not publicly. Well, now someone has.
I do really like your sort of bare bones, not too fancy, brutally truthful writing so far. It might not always strike a chord in me, but you have a good knowledge of excellent execution, a powerful minimalism, which you have shown in some of the pieces I've read from you so far. And my judgement certainly isn't paramount.