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Your Hugs
today I learned
I had never been hugged before
not the kind that melt you
like succulent chocolate
that fills your mouth
and sends tingles down your spine
or when the sun kisses
the last frost
and tickles the ground
for the first time in months
today I learned
I had never felt love's welcome
not the way that God
touches the sky
with blankets of color
before she sleeps
or the way a hot
towel snuggles
you after a cool
swim in the spring lake
today I learned
what it feels like
to be the bud that opens
herself completely to the warmth
what it feels like
for the pine tree
to have the weight of winter
melted from her body
today I learned to let go
and let care's passion
touch my soul when I stepped
in to your tender embrace
today,
I learned
I had never been hugged before
not the kind that melt you
like succulent chocolate
that fills your mouth
and sends tingles down your spine
or when the sun kisses
the last frost
and tickles the ground
for the first time in months
today I learned
I had never felt love's welcome
not the way that God
touches the sky
with blankets of color
before she sleeps
or the way a hot
towel snuggles
you after a cool
swim in the spring lake
today I learned
what it feels like
to be the bud that opens
herself completely to the warmth
what it feels like
for the pine tree
to have the weight of winter
melted from her body
today I learned to let go
and let care's passion
touch my soul when I stepped
in to your tender embrace
today,
I learned
Written by
raorrick
(Rachel O.)
Published 12th May 2013
| Edited 5th Jun 2013
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Re: Your Hugs
12th May 2013 00:25am
re: Re: Your Hugs
13th May 2013 4:38am
Re: Your Hugs
Anonymous
12th May 2013 3:22am
Really nice write Rachel O.
Strider
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re: Re: Your Hugs
13th May 2013 4:38am
Re: Your Hugs
12th May 2013 2:20pm
The imagery in this poem really give it meaning. The joy of the persona is palpable.
A good write, Rachel.
A good write, Rachel.
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re: Re: Your Hugs
13th May 2013 4:39am
Re: Your Hugs
12th May 2013 2:45pm
Hugs are underrated. To experience such hugs as you eloquently paint with words is life abundant. Blending nature into such a wonder with your piece is even more encompassing. Beautiful reality you share with us.
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re: Re: Your Hugs
13th May 2013 4:47am
A reality indeed.
True they are underrated...if the world would stop and hug each other in this way, there would be far more peace than there is now.
Thank you for your kindness, Ken!
True they are underrated...if the world would stop and hug each other in this way, there would be far more peace than there is now.
Thank you for your kindness, Ken!
Re: Your Hugs
12th May 2013 3:29pm
Oh Rachel I got about half way through the piece and it hit me in the heart like a fist, I feel every word and can relate; beautiful!
Red
Red
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re: Re: Your Hugs
13th May 2013 4:49am
I am so glad that you can relate to this...everyone should feel this kind of hug :)
Re: Your Hugs
Anonymous
12th May 2013 4:18pm
wow, this is really excellent writing..with depths to every line..to shed the pain, renew, and then feel loving arms truly hold you is an experience well worth writing about..great stuf R.
peace
peace

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re: Re: Your Hugs
13th May 2013 4:50am
Thank you Miki...I appreciate your understanding of the poem...so glad you stopped by!
Re: Your Hugs
4th Jun 2013 7:15am
"today I learned to let go
and let care's passion
touch my soul when I stepped
in to your tender embrace"<---beautiful lines!
This is Amazing, Rachel!
Poetic Love~
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re: Re: Your Hugs
15th Jul 2013 7:14am
Thank you so much Rain, it means a lot that you stopped by and left such a wonderful comment. ;)