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Each Others Eyes
Just for a moment
can we...
step behind the lines
can we..
try to see ourselves
through...
someone else's eyes
As I step back
and realize
there are 6 versions
of me...
meaning
there are 6 completely
different sides
Sometimes I'm hard on me
so can u please let me see through
your eyes...
and when...
You're being hard on you...
well I
Think I can lend you mine.
I think I...
can lend you mine.
can we...
step behind the lines
can we..
try to see ourselves
through...
someone else's eyes
As I step back
and realize
there are 6 versions
of me...
meaning
there are 6 completely
different sides
Sometimes I'm hard on me
so can u please let me see through
your eyes...
and when...
You're being hard on you...
well I
Think I can lend you mine.
I think I...
can lend you mine.
Published 10th May 2013
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10th May 2013 11:35pm
11th May 2013 00:58am
Thank You Sistah Natural...
and I love your insightful poems....
You are a Queen
it spills through your words when you write!
Fire
and I love your insightful poems....
You are a Queen
it spills through your words when you write!
Fire
11th May 2013 2:52am
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Anonymous
11th May 2013 2:02pm
Hey, Byrd. Nice flows and rhythms to this, your usual unobtrusive and subtle use of rhyme with a gentle (and wise) message. Well done, my friend. Red
13th May 2013 11:47pm
12th May 2013 2:32am
Love this Fire
Another insightful poem.
Sometimes it takes a friend to see you through
much love
G
Another insightful poem.
Sometimes it takes a friend to see you through
much love
G
13th May 2013 11:48pm
Hey Glynis...
I was just thinking of a lil ditty
and this is w3hat I came up with!
Fire
I was just thinking of a lil ditty
and this is w3hat I came up with!
Fire
Anonymous
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12th May 2013 7:51am
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14th Jul 2013 8:47pm
sometimes people are harder on them selfs than they should be.I would love to see myself through somebody else's eyes. i love the poem
15th Jul 2013 8:38pm
Thank you so much...
I appreciate you taking the time to read this.
XOXO
Fire
I appreciate you taking the time to read this.
XOXO
Fire
13th Aug 2013 3:27pm
Nice write sweetheart. We are critical of ourselves in all aspects, if we could look through different eyes we would see the true beauty we keep hidden. Thanks for sharing Fire!!
