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Drifting Dreamer
Brokedown dreaming
softy drifting out to sea
Sunlight shifting
gently mocking me
cloud burst diamonds
tears trickle gold
are there any lessons left to learn
or am I just getting old?
Worlds quietly dying
and in here its only me..
Drifting out I close my eyes
and let the sea swallow me.
softy drifting out to sea
Sunlight shifting
gently mocking me
cloud burst diamonds
tears trickle gold
are there any lessons left to learn
or am I just getting old?
Worlds quietly dying
and in here its only me..
Drifting out I close my eyes
and let the sea swallow me.
Published 10th May 2013
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Anonymous
10th May 2013 9:24pm
short and very sweet-sad river lily...strider
10th May 2013 9:56pm
sad but never to late unleash the fury always say hahah BLAZE OF GLORY never 2 late.
10th May 2013 11:01pm
Anonymous
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12th May 2013 7:37am
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4th Jun 2013 1:38am
there is sadness in the grace of this, & there is serenity in the sadness...
Anonymous
4th Jun 2013 6:45pm
Don't give up, getting old isn't the end of anything unless you want it to be. Sad but nice write. :)
