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Beneath The Rock
Summers were so sweet
Our love was in full bloom
You’d leave the note
Beneath the rock
Our secret rendezvous
Come meet me by the docks at dark
We’ll swim beneath the moon
Then name the constellations
make sweet love all night
alone just me and you
So tender were those moments
All new, so sweet we were
Still love to read
The notes beneath the rock
You leave me there
Our love was in full bloom
You’d leave the note
Beneath the rock
Our secret rendezvous
Come meet me by the docks at dark
We’ll swim beneath the moon
Then name the constellations
make sweet love all night
alone just me and you
So tender were those moments
All new, so sweet we were
Still love to read
The notes beneath the rock
You leave me there
Published 9th May 2013
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Anonymous
9th May 2013 12:31pm
Oh my...left alone...ouch!!! What a good write...;)
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9th May 2013 1:23pm
That so beautiful and what a wonderful innocent quality to it! Beautiful, Dear!
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Anonymous
9th May 2013 4:08pm
This is just so right..I loved the sentiment and the near- magical, mystery in it..lovely work!
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