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A Kid In A Candy Shop
If life were a piece of candy,
it'd be black licorice.
Because there's only a few
people that it's good to.
it'd be black licorice.
Because there's only a few
people that it's good to.
Published 9th May 2013
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14th Jul 2013 5:06am
I like the simplicity of this poem. Sometimes less really is more. I like the metaphor and the way that it perfectly reflects the sentiment.
