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Let Me Please You
Let me please you, invite me to touch you
my need to please has control of my mind
anything you can think of I'll give you
a better offer would be hard to find
I need to taste you now, let me please you
let me lick everywhere that you like
I feel an urgency to provide your rapture
and to impale myself on your spike
Let me please you, I'll do it continuously
we can both enjoy multiple highs
don't make me wait to please you
let's just say it would not be wise
Tell me what you like, let me please you
let your imagination run wild
by the time I fulfill all your fantasies
I guarantee that you will have smiled
my need to please has control of my mind
anything you can think of I'll give you
a better offer would be hard to find
I need to taste you now, let me please you
let me lick everywhere that you like
I feel an urgency to provide your rapture
and to impale myself on your spike
Let me please you, I'll do it continuously
we can both enjoy multiple highs
don't make me wait to please you
let's just say it would not be wise
Tell me what you like, let me please you
let your imagination run wild
by the time I fulfill all your fantasies
I guarantee that you will have smiled
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re: Re: Let Me Please You
8th May 2013 6:16pm
Re: Let Me Please You
8th May 2013 6:04pm
oh yes..let me please you, let me please you, let me please you..ah those words!
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re: Re: Let Me Please You
8th May 2013 6:17pm
what can I say
it's my "need to please" shinning through
thanks for checking me out
it's my "need to please" shinning through
thanks for checking me out
Re: Let Me Please You
8th May 2013 6:38pm
re: Re: Let Me Please You
8th May 2013 7:22pm
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8th May 2013 7:23pm
Re: Let Me Please You
8th May 2013 8:02pm
The urgency was well felt. Wonderful to read, and it will be shown to Sir. Thank you.
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re: Re: Let Me Please You
8th May 2013 8:06pm
pleased that it was enjoyed!
thanks for your comment
check out "angel of submission" on my page
thanks for your comment
check out "angel of submission" on my page
Re: Let Me Please You
8th May 2013 10:37pm
i love this it's great authority for the rhythm of this word by word :) let me please you Deb :)
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re: Re: Let Me Please You
9th May 2013 00:38am
Re: Let Me Please You
9th May 2013 2:13am
I like the way you use few words to drive home your point..deeply sensual..there's an urgency in your style that give your piece that 3d effect..erotic indeed!!
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re: Re: Let Me Please You
9th May 2013 3:06am
Re: Let Me Please You
10th May 2013 3:50am
Steamy, sexy and submissive...just the way I like em'. Great write and pic...I enjoyed!
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re: Re: Let Me Please You
10th May 2013 4:27am
thank you for yet another comment
seems I have another fan
appreciate you reading my work
seems I have another fan
appreciate you reading my work
re: re: Re: Let Me Please You
10th May 2013 4:53am
:)...feel the love Deborahlee! Have fun meeting people and sharing your work. There's lots to do on here. I'm sure you have many fans.:) xo
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Re: Let Me Please You
Anonymous
11th May 2013 12:14pm
I'm sure many would be willing for to please them. Sexy! :)
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re: Re: Let Me Please You
11th May 2013 6:17pm
Re: Let Me Please You
22nd May 2014 7:53pm
impale myself on your spike
a new word I have earned for
penis meat sword handle stick fish bone leash and now ur newer one spike
a new word I have earned for
penis meat sword handle stick fish bone leash and now ur newer one spike
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