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TAKE ME ROUGHLY
Tear off of my panties
Bend me over and show me whose boss
Hit it from back
Take me roughly
No need for pleasantries
Talk to me dirty
Save the sweet talk for making love
Down and dirty
Make my legs tremble
As you plunge in every inch
Deeper and deeper
Make my screams get louder
Slap my ass and ask me whose it is
Joy and pain is what I want to feel
Flip me over make everything scatter
Raw sex is my request
Make me cream all over your dick
Afterwards I will lick it clean
Grab my waist and don’t let me escape
Suck my nipples hard
As my nails trail down your back
Feel my pussy tighten around your shaft
As you plunge in and out
Do anything we want as two consenting adults
Grab my hair as I suck your dick clean
Make me gag as you fill my mouth
Tasting our combination
Push me against wall
Tell me spread them
Touch me all over
Push your body against mine
Use four fingers and do an internal examination
Flick my clit make it twitch
Nibble on my ears
Kisses on my neck
Make me gasp as you fuck me over and over
Pump me fast grind me slow
Feel me cream as I lose control
Bend me over and show me whose boss
Hit it from back
Take me roughly
No need for pleasantries
Talk to me dirty
Save the sweet talk for making love
Down and dirty
Make my legs tremble
As you plunge in every inch
Deeper and deeper
Make my screams get louder
Slap my ass and ask me whose it is
Joy and pain is what I want to feel
Flip me over make everything scatter
Raw sex is my request
Make me cream all over your dick
Afterwards I will lick it clean
Grab my waist and don’t let me escape
Suck my nipples hard
As my nails trail down your back
Feel my pussy tighten around your shaft
As you plunge in and out
Do anything we want as two consenting adults
Grab my hair as I suck your dick clean
Make me gag as you fill my mouth
Tasting our combination
Push me against wall
Tell me spread them
Touch me all over
Push your body against mine
Use four fingers and do an internal examination
Flick my clit make it twitch
Nibble on my ears
Kisses on my neck
Make me gasp as you fuck me over and over
Pump me fast grind me slow
Feel me cream as I lose control
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Re: TAKE ME ROUGHLY
7th May 2013 8:11pm
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7th May 2013 9:04pm
Re: TAKE ME ROUGHLY
Anonymous
7th May 2013 8:13pm
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Re: TAKE ME ROUGHLY
7th May 2013 9:42pm
A beautiful erotic write.
lovely images.
"Use four fingers and do an internal examination"
Love that line.
lovely images.
"Use four fingers and do an internal examination"
Love that line.
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Re: TAKE ME ROUGHLY
7th May 2013 10:07pm
Do anything we want as consenting adults- Fav Line
You and your pen are the perfect duo!!
Fantabulous job sweets!!
Still a FAN!!
Sir Lancelott
You and your pen are the perfect duo!!
Fantabulous job sweets!!
Still a FAN!!
Sir Lancelott
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Re: TAKE ME ROUGHLY
8th May 2013 00:33am
Re: TAKE ME ROUGHLY
8th May 2013 6:11am
Good Lord have mercy!! That was a smoking hot submission, thoroughly enjoyed.
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Anonymous
- Edited 6th Mar 2019 10:45pm
8th May 2013 9:52pm
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Re: TAKE ME ROUGHLY
8th May 2013 11:17pm
You definitely know who to use verbs that get the reader "going". Can melt an ice cube in seconds!
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Re: TAKE ME ROUGHLY
9th May 2013 1:13am
whew!...I think you got your point across..lol...this is so so naughty and so well written .damn!!!
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Re: TAKE ME ROUGHLY
10th May 2013 4:39am
.....and naturally, you are going to force a king to oblige. Idyllically written, received and interpreted.
"I think you're ready....."
"I think you're ready....."
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Re: TAKE ME ROUGHLY
Anonymous
13th May 2013 3:06pm
Excellent! You stay in complete control of your desired pleasure while begging for the roughness. Sensual x 100
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