SoulReaper

Nice write Red...Good Luck!

Strider....

Thanks Gotta catch up with you guys(jokeing)!!!

Red

Great job dear, love the scene the picture and fancy font sets, good luck in the comp... I recognised the words lol.

LOL ohh damn and I thought I could get it past you without notice hahaha Thanks my dear.

Red

Red, you must permit me to express my unconditional love for this poem. It's my kind of thing, these dark things.

I like the confident pride in Death's voice; I love his character and attitude as portrayed in each verse. He despises us, thinks we are foolish and our struggles are vain. He is fearless and he knows we can't escape him. "Religions are like a fad followed by the sheep," he says.

He is merciless, he is contemptuous, he is abusive, he is death. What I love most about this poem is that death is speaking. I am highly entertained and exhilarated reading this.

Thank you, Red. For writing it.

Thank you, I like portraying the character in the first person or becoming the character so to speak,It lends to the credulity of the piece. Thank you again I am thrilled you enjoyed it.


Red

Nice i really like that one

great stuff

marcus

Thanks Marcus! A little change of pace it is for a comp.


Red

Good job, dear Red. Scary though.

Lol Grace no worries I'll protect you from the boggey man!Thank you big huggs
 
 
Red

Always excellent form You have Dear Red!!!
but don't send me again to hell...I am but babe in the woods:) Quite witty spins You put upon things-You always carry justice with that---loved it!!!
Good luck in the comp!!!

Justice is so deeply ingrained in my DNA that I just can't help it, I am the #1 protector of the underdogs and downtrodden. Thank you Soul for always leaving positive feedback.

Red

second that emotion Red:)!!!

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Red I love this!!!!! the imagery the verbiage mixed with little dashes of your own ideology intricately woven throughout..this darkness is very seductive..very alluring...

Mr.Naajir how very perceptive of you, yes there is much of my own personal beliefs in this piece and my view of the religio-theological Hypocrisy many like to hide behind. In the end we all are equally guilty of the same things... self-serving pettiness.Thank you for your high regards and reading my humble piece.  
 
 
Red

Fantastic Presentation with a foreboding sense of wonderment...This is so well done that your darkness is enlightening...lol...Well done Red ;-)

For those adept at reading between the lines there is always messages hidden in plain sight.
Thanks D! :-)


Red