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tickle til you squirt
up and down
wet wet
in and out
tickle tickle
dribble dribble
tickle squirt
squirt dribble
dribble squirt dribble
xoxo
(this isnt sopposed to be serious)
wet wet
in and out
tickle tickle
dribble dribble
tickle squirt
squirt dribble
dribble squirt dribble
xoxo
(this isnt sopposed to be serious)
Published 19th Oct 2010
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11th Nov 2010 2:11pm
funy yet dunu i just like it natural anything that comes out on the mind just write it :P
11th Nov 2010 2:45pm
well it made me laugh, but personally, I call my doctor when it gets down to a dribble. Or is this about basketball, running up and down the court playing agaist some short squirt who slips on a wet spot while weaving in and out when he's about to shoot a basket? Then you tickle him to get the ball in your hands and take the final shot for the victory. Forgive me, I have a vivid imagination. It's actually a very good poem, good rhyme scheme, well metered and a nice flow from begiing to end.
26th Aug 2011 1:03am
Anonymous
18th Feb 2012 00:05am
Sometimes fun is better than serious
