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Let us be as
How are You
So sweet
flavored
as amazing
misted
on
My spring day tongue
I arrive to tell You
today
is upon us
I'm home
anxious
is Your man
to know deep
thoughts
I stretch out
Love...
let us be as
ONE
hidden
shading
each other
from flights
to a midday sun
deep heat in deed
our lips dipped in X
poured upon slick backs
washing cascading tending
this bountiful Garden of we
Given
we praise
legs enfolded
scents of oneness
blown softened bliss
as kisses come crashing
heat ever blazed impassion
burning perfect endless desire
that which delivers perfect fire
where
licking
from the flames
dance white hot sayings
praying
perfect incantation
tastings
to speak in tongues
come
my lovely one
in chant
dive
down here close
my Dear near
Twogether
In selfless scry
Love...
let us be as
So sweet
flavored
as amazing
misted
on
My spring day tongue
I arrive to tell You
today
is upon us
I'm home
anxious
is Your man
to know deep
thoughts
I stretch out
Love...
let us be as
ONE
hidden
shading
each other
from flights
to a midday sun
deep heat in deed
our lips dipped in X
poured upon slick backs
washing cascading tending
this bountiful Garden of we
Given
we praise
legs enfolded
scents of oneness
blown softened bliss
as kisses come crashing
heat ever blazed impassion
burning perfect endless desire
that which delivers perfect fire
where
licking
from the flames
dance white hot sayings
praying
perfect incantation
tastings
to speak in tongues
come
my lovely one
in chant
dive
down here close
my Dear near
Twogether
In selfless scry
Love...
let us be as
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Re: Let us be as
2nd May 2013 6:26am
I just LOVE the way your ink flows!
You are soooooooooooooo INCREDIBLE!!
"washing cascading tending
this bountiful Garden of we
Given
we praise
legs enfolded
scents of oneness"<-----Gorgeous
Poetic Love~
You are soooooooooooooo INCREDIBLE!!
"washing cascading tending
this bountiful Garden of we
Given
we praise
legs enfolded
scents of oneness"<-----Gorgeous
Poetic Love~
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2nd May 2013 2:04pm
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2nd May 2013 9:11am
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Re: Let us be as
2nd May 2013 11:19am
This is a beautiful flowing write, penned with much loveliness. Wonderful write Soul. :)
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2nd May 2013 2:05pm
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Anonymous
2nd May 2013 12:22pm
Great job soul...what flow from your pen!
Strider...
Strider...
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2nd May 2013 2:06pm
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2nd May 2013 1:51pm
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2nd May 2013 2:07pm
Re: Let us be as
2nd May 2013 3:33pm
Another interesting poetic format from you Soul...it must have been hard to come out with this as your word flows, but with a mind like yours, it's just a breeze!
Twogether - interesting coined word also...
A job well done and well thought of!!!
Twogether - interesting coined word also...
A job well done and well thought of!!!
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re: Re: Let us be as
2nd May 2013 4:12pm
Thank You for such kind words Engr. :)
it's done in off time first/ then on time rhythm
legato speed...to represent hows life and love is...off time in getting legs and feeling the way...smooth or organized sections where things are harmonious represented in two...and then how it jumps back off kilter....the circle of things as it is:)
Thank You Kind Sir!!!
it's done in off time first/ then on time rhythm
legato speed...to represent hows life and love is...off time in getting legs and feeling the way...smooth or organized sections where things are harmonious represented in two...and then how it jumps back off kilter....the circle of things as it is:)
Thank You Kind Sir!!!
Re: Let us be as
2nd May 2013 5:13pm
This is very impressive, Soulman. The craft and the sentiment meld together amazing well. I admire your workmanship and talent. Awesome!
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re: Re: Let us be as
2nd May 2013 6:41pm
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2nd May 2013 7:21pm
i like the direction you have been goin with your structure lately sd. not just that is asthetically eye catching but it just happens to roll with a cool flow in that format...
well done sd...
well done sd...
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re: Re: Let us be as
2nd May 2013 9:58pm
That means a lot from You JR, VERY appreciated!!!
Trying to tinker, and get myself to see/think a bit different...hard to do locked in the same brain all the time lol
Trying to tinker, and get myself to see/think a bit different...hard to do locked in the same brain all the time lol
Re: Let us be as
Anonymous
2nd May 2013 10:44pm
simply wonderful..beautiful..great work!
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2nd May 2013 11:33pm
Re: Let us be as
3rd May 2013 00:17am
Blown softened bliss-Fav Line
Your pen is amazing Bro. SOUL!!
Sir Lancelott
Your pen is amazing Bro. SOUL!!
Sir Lancelott
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re: Re: Let us be as
3rd May 2013 00:36am
LANCE!!!
I thank You Sir!!!
this is as close to Your realm of expertise I can get...I appreciate Your kind words Always My Friend!!!
I thank You Sir!!!
this is as close to Your realm of expertise I can get...I appreciate Your kind words Always My Friend!!!
Re: Let us be as
3rd May 2013 00:26am
Oh My Goodness it doesnt gete more beautifuk than that Soul....
I fell in love with this poem
and cant stop reading it!
XOXOXO
Fire
I fell in love with this poem
and cant stop reading it!
XOXOXO
Fire
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re: Re: Let us be as
3rd May 2013 00:39am
Awwww I thank You SO very much Dear fire:)))
Thank You for reading and such warm comments!!!
Thank You for reading and such warm comments!!!
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Anonymous
3rd May 2013 7:03pm
First poem of yours that I've read. This touched a chord. This is perfect...
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re: Re: Let us be as
3rd May 2013 9:53pm
I thank You Very Much Petit!!!
I'm glad My work spoke to You, Greatly appreciate the read and kind comment!!!
I'm glad My work spoke to You, Greatly appreciate the read and kind comment!!!
Re: Let us be as
4th May 2013 6:44am
Lucky girl indeed, beautiful poem, Soul.
Emotion rings clear in this one.
:)
Emotion rings clear in this one.
:)
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re: Re: Let us be as
4th May 2013 4:45pm
Thank You Dear Scribbler, Trying to think different with styles, I'm not good at researching proper forms to learn them correctly.
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8th May 2013 5:22pm