Raw Desires

The dark side of Sex, IS the most sensual! At least... That's what I think!

because its usually is so extreme and intense...

hot

thank you :)

Amazing piece!

Thank you :)

Oh yes, I really do like this one. How can so much be said in such a small place.

I know, right...thank you, glad u like this :)

Acts unscripted- Fav Line
Great read sweets!
You gave good pen!!!

Sir Lancelott

lol...thank you Sir Lancelott :)

this was raw indeed. but not in the x rated sense. it was honest. i feel you need to explore the imagery more. make me feel the sweat you feel. the humid intensity that fogs the skin covering the arched alcoves hidden in your spine.

Unashamed demons

this line i like.
I feel where you're going with this.

you're:
uninhibited
present
ravenous
violent
salacious
wet

there are reason, there are mental picture involved when that feeling is being communicated. tap into that. describe them in the atypical way our bodies feel fear with love, anger with lust, freedom with pain, and danger with pleasure.

tap into the complexity and when you have
make it simple.

amazing insight, thank you, and that was great information

Thank you :)

Riveting intense
Pleasures of sin
Our fantasies freed
And filled with uninhibited
Acts unscripted
Fornication unleashing
Unashamed demons

... And without regard to those around us ... Cool write!