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at the end of my road
don't shed a tear
as they stackin the rocks
a single black rose all I ask
if that's not to much
tied to the blank marker
with a purple bow
sealed with your kiss
a gift for my soul
so when the next lifetime arrives
it knows with whom to grow old
but until then
a little warmth for the cold
as they stackin the rocks
a single black rose all I ask
if that's not to much
tied to the blank marker
with a purple bow
sealed with your kiss
a gift for my soul
so when the next lifetime arrives
it knows with whom to grow old
but until then
a little warmth for the cold
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Re: at the end of my road
Anonymous
30th Apr 2013 4:14am
Love it!!!! Beautiful write. Welcome back my friend, you've been missed! :)
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re: Re: at the end of my road
30th Apr 2013 4:22am
Re: at the end of my road
30th Apr 2013 4:39am
Short and sweet.
And straight to the point.
Your light and clever with the rhymes.
And straight to the point.
Your light and clever with the rhymes.
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re: Re: at the end of my road
30th Apr 2013 7:07am
Re: at the end of my road
Anonymous
30th Apr 2013 8:57am
So sad..the brevity adds to the sadness..though the write itself is entirely beautiful...
You have such talent!
You have such talent!
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re: Re: at the end of my road
hey miki, thank you for stopping by, not shore I would agree with the "talented" part, have you been drinking.? ;-p
but thank you anyways :)
but thank you anyways :)
Re: at the end of my road
30th Apr 2013 9:18pm
re: Re: at the end of my road
30th Apr 2013 9:28pm
hey thanks atakti, I saw it as shitfull, but a picture can't be painted with only one shade of shit hey
Re: at the end of my road
Anonymous
30th Apr 2013 9:59pm
Awesome write!!!! Where the hell.....you came back from the dead lol????
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re: Re: at the end of my road
30th Apr 2013 11:54pm
haha back from the dead to fuck with ya head.. lol leave that for the word warriors out there I think, thanks chilipino
Re: at the end of my road
2nd May 2013 5:43pm
There's a softer side of you, like Sears! :)
This is Great! Tender and Real!
You are so diverse and I'm loving that about your work!
Pen Respect~
This is Great! Tender and Real!
You are so diverse and I'm loving that about your work!
Pen Respect~
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re: Re: at the end of my road
2nd May 2013 9:29pm
there are many sides to all of us rain, thank you for your humbling words