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GHD (Good Hair Day)
Fuck you, fuck me, and seriously,
fuck poetic tripe.
(fuck it twice in the ass)
Here’s the deal:
I want my hair to mat
from trailing through
the line of come
I lick off your
lower belly.
The tactility of
that memento
crusting near
my jawline,
as my lips
close over the rim
of an overpriced
latte
celebrates the triumph.
That you got off.
I want to get you off.
Fuck it,
I don't want to just
get you off,
I want to fuck your face,
smother your reservations
while my mouth
vacuums your soul
out through your dick
one wet moan at a time.
I want to smell you on me
when I dress
so that each time
a draft catches me,
I shiver and smile,
reliving
the end.
the middle.
the beginning.
and anticipating
beginning
again.
I want your come in my hair.
So I can twist
a piece of your hot lust
around my finger
halfway through the day,
in effigy
of the way
I twist myself
around your
cock,
around your
mind.
fuck poetic tripe.
(fuck it twice in the ass)
Here’s the deal:
I want my hair to mat
from trailing through
the line of come
I lick off your
lower belly.
The tactility of
that memento
crusting near
my jawline,
as my lips
close over the rim
of an overpriced
latte
celebrates the triumph.
That you got off.
I want to get you off.
Fuck it,
I don't want to just
get you off,
I want to fuck your face,
smother your reservations
while my mouth
vacuums your soul
out through your dick
one wet moan at a time.
I want to smell you on me
when I dress
so that each time
a draft catches me,
I shiver and smile,
reliving
the end.
the middle.
the beginning.
and anticipating
beginning
again.
I want your come in my hair.
So I can twist
a piece of your hot lust
around my finger
halfway through the day,
in effigy
of the way
I twist myself
around your
cock,
around your
mind.
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Re: GHD (Good Hair Day)
30th Apr 2013 2:17am
I dare to say body parts have never been so delicious!
Topped off with a wonderful and let short ending!
Topped off with a wonderful and let short ending!
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re: Re: GHD (Good Hair Day)
30th Apr 2013 8:56pm
And hair never so easy to style!
Thanks Jazz. Always appreciate an r/r from you, man.
Thanks Jazz. Always appreciate an r/r from you, man.
Re: GHD (Good Hair Day)
30th Apr 2013 8:07am
"while my mouth
vacuums your soul
out through your dick"
Betty
I got to the vacuum line, and thought "Oh Dear God Betty Please no!!!!!"
Then I read the next line, and nearly jumped out of my damn seat rooting for you. lol
Way to drop that cliche right on its fucking head!
Absolutely Fabulous!
My kind of GHD indeed ... lol
vacuums your soul
out through your dick"
Betty
I got to the vacuum line, and thought "Oh Dear God Betty Please no!!!!!"
Then I read the next line, and nearly jumped out of my damn seat rooting for you. lol
Way to drop that cliche right on its fucking head!
Absolutely Fabulous!
My kind of GHD indeed ... lol
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re: Re: GHD (Good Hair Day)
30th Apr 2013 8:58pm
Your comment is among the most kickass things I've read all day, Mags.
Fucking awesome! I nearly jumped out of my seat rooting for you rooting for me. Your excitement is fan-fuckin'g-tastic.
Thanks again,
Betty
Fucking awesome! I nearly jumped out of my seat rooting for you rooting for me. Your excitement is fan-fuckin'g-tastic.
Thanks again,
Betty
re: re: Re: GHD (Good Hair Day)
1st May 2013 2:22am
ok girl...
My turn to rant a bit, and I am gonna borrow your thread to do it. I hope you do not mind.
I am a reader Betty ... First and foremost, above all things, I am a reader. I read everything, and I mean everything from dictionaries, to porn.
Depending on what I am reading I "WANT" as a reader as well. I want to learn. I want to dream. I want to play, work, eat, smell, touch, fuck, and lie down and die with words. They are my first love, my greatest love, and they always will be.
and I am a cheerleader of those who write them.
I LOVE to read a kid just starting out on this great adventure. I will read through pounds upon pounds of drivel, botched tries, and passionate failures just to find that one word, that one amazing word that has me cheering in my seat
"Hell Yeah ! You found it ! You smelled it, tasted it, touched it, heard it, and saw it. isn't it fucking wonderful?"
Now... If I feel that way about a kid pouring their heart out awkwardly, and gawkingly.
Imagine how I get over someone like you?
Yeah... I know I am weird ;) lol
My turn to rant a bit, and I am gonna borrow your thread to do it. I hope you do not mind.
I am a reader Betty ... First and foremost, above all things, I am a reader. I read everything, and I mean everything from dictionaries, to porn.
Depending on what I am reading I "WANT" as a reader as well. I want to learn. I want to dream. I want to play, work, eat, smell, touch, fuck, and lie down and die with words. They are my first love, my greatest love, and they always will be.
and I am a cheerleader of those who write them.
I LOVE to read a kid just starting out on this great adventure. I will read through pounds upon pounds of drivel, botched tries, and passionate failures just to find that one word, that one amazing word that has me cheering in my seat
"Hell Yeah ! You found it ! You smelled it, tasted it, touched it, heard it, and saw it. isn't it fucking wonderful?"
Now... If I feel that way about a kid pouring their heart out awkwardly, and gawkingly.
Imagine how I get over someone like you?
Yeah... I know I am weird ;) lol
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re: re: re: Re: GHD (Good Hair Day)
2nd May 2013 3:27am
I fucking love you, Mags. Weird? You just outwrote anything I'll ever do in that passionate burst of yesfuckdamnhellright!
That's what it's a-fucking-bout.
And you made me blush clear down to my ass-crack with the praise.
It's like you want to not just soak them, read them, stare at them, own them, lick them with your brain-tongue... it's like you want to rip those fuckers from the pores of the air, throw them on a shower curtain, cover yourself in Crisco and roll AROUND in the shit.
I get it.
I get it loudly.
And, you'll understand, I get it quietly. Clearly.
You're a total babe. Your brain is fucking sexy.
That's what it's a-fucking-bout.
And you made me blush clear down to my ass-crack with the praise.
It's like you want to not just soak them, read them, stare at them, own them, lick them with your brain-tongue... it's like you want to rip those fuckers from the pores of the air, throw them on a shower curtain, cover yourself in Crisco and roll AROUND in the shit.
I get it.
I get it loudly.
And, you'll understand, I get it quietly. Clearly.
You're a total babe. Your brain is fucking sexy.
Re: GHD (Good Hair Day)
30th Apr 2013 10:56am
Speechless.......powerful, lustful, sultry and so damned real. Betty, DAMN!!!! 8^o
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re: Re: GHD (Good Hair Day)
30th Apr 2013 8:59pm
Re: GHD (Good Hair Day)
30th Apr 2013 1:12pm
Betty you are one lustful lady and I just love lustful ladies!
Great write, more I say More!
Great write, more I say More!
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re: Re: GHD (Good Hair Day)
30th Apr 2013 9:01pm
Thanks, dude.
But I'd have to point out there isn't any empirical evidence I'm a lady, or even female. I COULD be a genetically modified male lemur set in front of a typewriter beating out shit in random patterns until the mad scientists come along and scream CREATION!
Holy crap that would be fun!
But anyhoo, seriously, thanks for the r/r.
But I'd have to point out there isn't any empirical evidence I'm a lady, or even female. I COULD be a genetically modified male lemur set in front of a typewriter beating out shit in random patterns until the mad scientists come along and scream CREATION!
Holy crap that would be fun!
But anyhoo, seriously, thanks for the r/r.
re: re: Re: GHD (Good Hair Day)
2nd May 2013 00:12am
Oops Sorry Sir,
I crave your pardon! I'll take more water with it the next time ;-)
I crave your pardon! I'll take more water with it the next time ;-)
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re: re: re: Re: GHD (Good Hair Day)
2nd May 2013 3:29am
Re: GHD (Good Hair Day)
1st May 2013 6:08am
It's a strong and powerful write the way you use language here; You really manage to convey the feeling of wanting to merge with your lover so totally and completely..... :)
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re: Re: GHD (Good Hair Day)
2nd May 2013 3:30am
Re: GHD (Good Hair Day)
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- Edited 4th May 2013 12:20pm
4th May 2013 12:18pm
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