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she
She sits on the floor crying
I am holding her as she cries
I am slowly breaking in side
Baby you are my life
I need you to survive
I will always be right by your side
I reach up and wipe the tears away
I lift your head up and look in your eyes
please stop crying baby iminlovewithyou
I need yall to survive
I am holding her as she cries
I am slowly breaking in side
Baby you are my life
I need you to survive
I will always be right by your side
I reach up and wipe the tears away
I lift your head up and look in your eyes
please stop crying baby iminlovewithyou
I need yall to survive
Published 29th Apr 2013
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29th Apr 2013 5:15pm
Love poems could be so much sweeter, if the spelling wasnt messed up... and it really needs a better title....
29th Apr 2013 5:18pm
29th Apr 2013 5:29pm
Pleeeeeeeeeease fix it!
1at line on not in
2nd line, cries not crys
3rd line, inside one word
4th line, you're not your
last line, y'all and survive.
1at line on not in
2nd line, cries not crys
3rd line, inside one word
4th line, you're not your
last line, y'all and survive.
29th Apr 2013 7:21pm
I liked it.. And the name is perfect. Yes the spelling could be better but it still gets the point across. :)
30th Apr 2013 1:37am
