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Touch it (featuring a response by Solomon Song)
I know that you are looking
and that you want to touch it
It's slightly cooled
since departing from the heat
Smooth and silky
glistening with moisture
as droplets trickle down and fall
I know that you are looking
and that you want to touch it
It's soft and its wet
just give it a rub
Now, I know just what your thinking of
and where your head is at
but baby...It's not that
Your wrong, don't take that bet
Since I've piqued* your interest
I guess I'll have to share
It's not what you were thinking of
Hey dude, it just
MY WET HAIR
(my first attempt at adding humor...at the request
of my cousin Veronica! so I dedicate this to her)
word use correction *thanks arbelos
A Response...created by Solomon Song
So I draw near to touch you there,
Run-rub my fingers through that hair,
Its wetness spread by same fingers.
Your favoured shampoo's smell lingers.
Dark lengths around my digits wind
Of the first clump one hand does find,
Then I give short, sharp, playful tugs;
You wince, I soothe with squeezy hugs
Of the arm that's of your hair free,
Then we descend in reverie'.
I smell another wetness come
From parts that are south of your tum,
That is the silent sex "Hello"
From your greater lips down below.
Then: "I want back in the shower"
WITH YOU! Feel - taste - pussy power!
Oh, why that blush across your face?
You wanted there in the first place!
Thus I bow to my Cougar Queen,
Get "down dirty" & then shower-clean!
and that you want to touch it
It's slightly cooled
since departing from the heat
Smooth and silky
glistening with moisture
as droplets trickle down and fall
I know that you are looking
and that you want to touch it
It's soft and its wet
just give it a rub
Now, I know just what your thinking of
and where your head is at
but baby...It's not that
Your wrong, don't take that bet
Since I've piqued* your interest
I guess I'll have to share
It's not what you were thinking of
Hey dude, it just
MY WET HAIR
(my first attempt at adding humor...at the request
of my cousin Veronica! so I dedicate this to her)
word use correction *thanks arbelos
A Response...created by Solomon Song
So I draw near to touch you there,
Run-rub my fingers through that hair,
Its wetness spread by same fingers.
Your favoured shampoo's smell lingers.
Dark lengths around my digits wind
Of the first clump one hand does find,
Then I give short, sharp, playful tugs;
You wince, I soothe with squeezy hugs
Of the arm that's of your hair free,
Then we descend in reverie'.
I smell another wetness come
From parts that are south of your tum,
That is the silent sex "Hello"
From your greater lips down below.
Then: "I want back in the shower"
WITH YOU! Feel - taste - pussy power!
Oh, why that blush across your face?
You wanted there in the first place!
Thus I bow to my Cougar Queen,
Get "down dirty" & then shower-clean!
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