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seachange
lost track of the distraction
for a semi-segment of a split-second
and the
bottom
rose upp
up too oot
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eathe eeht to
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Published 28th Apr 2013
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Anonymous
28th Apr 2013 12:47pm
thought of as "c" change..as the notes split and disperse round our heads and away....it's cool
but it took me a bit to see it ;-)
but it took me a bit to see it ;-)
28th Apr 2013 2:53pm
dig it miki.
I had an overwhelming and very abrupt change of feeling, and how to explain it started falling apart for me, but I felt concrete on what it was...strange thing. As a painter, I would know exactly how to make it, but with words it eludes me...tried making it instead of describing it
appreciate it much
I had an overwhelming and very abrupt change of feeling, and how to explain it started falling apart for me, but I felt concrete on what it was...strange thing. As a painter, I would know exactly how to make it, but with words it eludes me...tried making it instead of describing it
appreciate it much
Anonymous
29th Apr 2013 7:32pm
creative lb
29th Apr 2013 7:42pm
