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facebook provokes me
I wanna decode dmt, post it electronically
unless your theories on conspiracy
involves extraterrestrials disproving themselves
then you are a tool, illuminati
another sterile term, a novelty
oddity, the new commodity
the clergy of the worthy
putting stock in absurdity
jihadist of the botched job
discharged, honorably
follow me
follow me
follow me
ha! fuck you
that was a test
and you failed miserably
I wanna decode dmt, post it electronically
unless your theories on conspiracy
involves extraterrestrials disproving themselves
then you are a tool, illuminati
another sterile term, a novelty
oddity, the new commodity
the clergy of the worthy
putting stock in absurdity
jihadist of the botched job
discharged, honorably
follow me
follow me
follow me
ha! fuck you
that was a test
and you failed miserably
Published 27th Apr 2013
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Anonymous
28th Apr 2013 12:53pm
makes me think of the blatant contradiction I see when I tell people not to follow like sheep and to research their beliefs..then they follow me in the same blind way...
facebook has to be the largest social experiment in history..based on 2 things that make it worthy-the illusion of both privacy and anonymity but still it's all illusion..(like life itself)
I like this one a lot lb, :-)
facebook has to be the largest social experiment in history..based on 2 things that make it worthy-the illusion of both privacy and anonymity but still it's all illusion..(like life itself)
I like this one a lot lb, :-)
28th Apr 2013 3:01pm
haha, for sure
I think this could work as a song, but I don't think it is anything too powerful on paper by itself. I do think it was a cool fbook post though,ha
much appreciato
I think this could work as a song, but I don't think it is anything too powerful on paper by itself. I do think it was a cool fbook post though,ha
much appreciato
28th Apr 2013 3:06pm
Darlin
I read this last night as well. The thought behind this intrigues me, and frankly makes me chuckle.
We are the weirdest of paradoxes aren't we?
Good stuff my friend :)
I read this last night as well. The thought behind this intrigues me, and frankly makes me chuckle.
We are the weirdest of paradoxes aren't we?
Good stuff my friend :)
28th Apr 2013 3:40pm
yes yes yes we are, and such a lovely and crippling paradox
intrigue works, i'll take that
and chuckles are worth more than gold
thanks maggie
intrigue works, i'll take that
and chuckles are worth more than gold
thanks maggie
29th Apr 2013 6:25pm
Nice, LB. First time I read it I thought I could hear it as a rap with those multi syllable rhymes and the "Follow Me" being a cool chorus/refrain. It works real well but I think you could even go further on this. Let it all hang out !!!
29th Apr 2013 7:43pm
yeah, definitely a hip hop song, if anything...just a bit of fun, thanks for reading Tony
Anonymous
29th Apr 2013 7:46pm
i like your pondering writes lb
30th Apr 2013 1:03am
