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He Played Me
The place was crowded as glasses tinkled
With the noise of dialogue that muffled in my ears
Smoke streamed in waves as he walked out on stage
I looked, he stared, this man of jive smiled
As he rigmarole among empty chairs
To place his tackle, he removed his instrument
A black beauty she was long and sleek
Licking her up, all warm and tender
He kept his eyes on me
An olde school player with his paraphernalia
He took the mick with flimflam flair,
Pulling their attention, hushing the cackle
announced that he was there
with a soulful note
That brought me to life
With extreme delight
He played it sweetly
The melody of my loins,
Which stroked me tenderly
In the key of my secrecy
Held me enthralled
With his fingers of agility
He played soft and slow
easy and mellow
inside the serenade of my heart
We struck an accord
…
I was his instrument,
in my mind’s eye,
the moment his lips touched mine
tested me, licking our connection
I became the tool of his trade
As he began to play
fondling me gently,
His warm breath across my neck
soothed the rough edges
Gentle fingers walked over my back
waking desires pathways
he struck a tone deep
the vibration of it
lingering
within my many folds
The instrument of his desire
I performed in the key of G
Enacted what he channeled
His sexual conduit
he stroked me from without
play me from within
sending trembles
making me sing
the siren song
Sensual
He played me sweetly
To the crowd's delight
And when he finished
He took a bow
smirking
He left the stage
Leaving me wet and spent
his hanging instrument
With the noise of dialogue that muffled in my ears
Smoke streamed in waves as he walked out on stage
I looked, he stared, this man of jive smiled
As he rigmarole among empty chairs
To place his tackle, he removed his instrument
A black beauty she was long and sleek
Licking her up, all warm and tender
He kept his eyes on me
An olde school player with his paraphernalia
He took the mick with flimflam flair,
Pulling their attention, hushing the cackle
announced that he was there
with a soulful note
That brought me to life
With extreme delight
He played it sweetly
The melody of my loins,
Which stroked me tenderly
In the key of my secrecy
Held me enthralled
With his fingers of agility
He played soft and slow
easy and mellow
inside the serenade of my heart
We struck an accord
…
I was his instrument,
in my mind’s eye,
the moment his lips touched mine
tested me, licking our connection
I became the tool of his trade
As he began to play
fondling me gently,
His warm breath across my neck
soothed the rough edges
Gentle fingers walked over my back
waking desires pathways
he struck a tone deep
the vibration of it
lingering
within my many folds
The instrument of his desire
I performed in the key of G
Enacted what he channeled
His sexual conduit
he stroked me from without
play me from within
sending trembles
making me sing
the siren song
Sensual
He played me sweetly
To the crowd's delight
And when he finished
He took a bow
smirking
He left the stage
Leaving me wet and spent
his hanging instrument
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Re: He Played Me
28th Apr 2013 00:37am
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Thank you Magdalena
I love Jazz...it took the wind out of me to get this all down
Much love
G
I love Jazz...it took the wind out of me to get this all down
Much love
G
Re: He Played Me
28th Apr 2013 00:41am
Oh my, my, my... hot DAMN!!! This was amazing, every stanza morsel of delectably descriptive words. I freaking loved it!!!
Red
Red
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re: Re: He Played Me
28th Apr 2013 11:46pm
Wow! I'm so glad Red....Girl you made me giggle.
Thank you for loving on my Jazz fetish
Much Love
G
Thank you for loving on my Jazz fetish
Much Love
G
Re: He Played Me
28th Apr 2013 1:16am
re: Re: He Played Me
28th Apr 2013 11:49pm
And she *Blushes*
Thank you dear Grace... (Shush..don't tell anyone)
Much love
G
Thank you dear Grace... (Shush..don't tell anyone)
Much love
G
Re: He Played Me
28th Apr 2013 1:52am
re: Re: He Played Me
28th Apr 2013 11:51pm
Giggling....Girl you are too much!!!
Thank you Flower, that means a lot coming from you
Much Love
G
Thank you Flower, that means a lot coming from you
Much Love
G
Re: He Played Me
28th Apr 2013 6:33am
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You are most kind Poetikmind
Thank you for stopping by and adding such a great comment.
But I have to say, it was all started with that first licking.... and he went down from there. ;)
G
Thank you for stopping by and adding such a great comment.
But I have to say, it was all started with that first licking.... and he went down from there. ;)
G
Re: He Played Me
28th Apr 2013 9:03am
Sounds of a wonderful show!!!
rhythm and dexterity You pen together perfectly forming true sensual Art!!!
excellent write Dear Glynis!!!
rhythm and dexterity You pen together perfectly forming true sensual Art!!!
excellent write Dear Glynis!!!
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re: Re: He Played Me
28th Apr 2013 11:59pm
You flatter me Soul
I'm just remembering an experience I was left with from a wonderful Jazz performance, although the seat was a bit wet when I finally stood. :)
Much Love
G
I'm just remembering an experience I was left with from a wonderful Jazz performance, although the seat was a bit wet when I finally stood. :)
Much Love
G
Re: He Played Me
Anonymous
28th Apr 2013 11:37am
I love getting played like that..write on dear Glynis..this is a hot and wonderful write!
much love :-)
much love :-)

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re: Re: He Played Me
29th Apr 2013 00:01am
Me too Miki
Thank you for that wonderful comment ...I finally got you to say Hot!
he..he..
Much love my friend
G
Thank you for that wonderful comment ...I finally got you to say Hot!
he..he..
Much love my friend
G
Re: He Played Me
28th Apr 2013 5:18pm
*smiles*
For me it has always been bass players or drummers.
Thoroughly enjoyed this G :)
For me it has always been bass players or drummers.
Thoroughly enjoyed this G :)
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re: Re: He Played Me
Maggie....so glad to see you!
I've always loved the wind section, something about that breath control....;) But drummers are cool too.
Much love
G
I've always loved the wind section, something about that breath control....;) But drummers are cool too.
Much love
G
Re: He Played Me
28th Apr 2013 8:23pm
WOW! I have a similar poem Called, 'He Plays Me.'
Im kinda in awe over this piece and that we shared the same pattern, as for as the message!
Beautiful! Just Beautiful! xo
Im kinda in awe over this piece and that we shared the same pattern, as for as the message!
Beautiful! Just Beautiful! xo
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re: Re: He Played Me
29th Apr 2013 00:48am
Rain...to be connected, in any way with your pen, is very flattering to me. I'm going to check it out.
I'm so overjoyed that you like this poem for my admiration to Jazz ;) ;)
It's a very sexy art form won't you say?
much love
G
I'm so overjoyed that you like this poem for my admiration to Jazz ;) ;)
It's a very sexy art form won't you say?
much love
G
Re: He Played Me
30th Apr 2013 1:04am
I was his instrument,
in my mind’s eye,
the moment his lips touched mine
tested me, licking our connection
I became the tool of his trade
Excellent poem...truly an invitation to anyone wanting to get played passionately, blowing sweet notes and letting the horn take over in delightful ectasy!:) I enjoyed immensely!!
in my mind’s eye,
the moment his lips touched mine
tested me, licking our connection
I became the tool of his trade
Excellent poem...truly an invitation to anyone wanting to get played passionately, blowing sweet notes and letting the horn take over in delightful ectasy!:) I enjoyed immensely!!
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re: Re: He Played Me
30th Apr 2013 9:17pm