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Sipping From Rainbows
My mind is a blank page
like an eraser has
vanquished my thoughts
leaving behind dirty smudges
where the words used to be
I think a trickster
is at play
stealing the words
my lips wish to utter
sealing them before
they can tumble from my tounge
embracing my muse
making love to her
she has been ill used
i've pursued her as she alludes me
she is the trickster
the one who put blinders
on my mind
she tells me I need to love again
knowing i've been lonely
she feeds me the ink
I need to be free
always there when I need her most
she speaks words of wisdom in my ear
tells me it's time I seek inspiration
sipping from rainbows
leaving behind the dank abyss
like an eraser has
vanquished my thoughts
leaving behind dirty smudges
where the words used to be
I think a trickster
is at play
stealing the words
my lips wish to utter
sealing them before
they can tumble from my tounge
embracing my muse
making love to her
she has been ill used
i've pursued her as she alludes me
she is the trickster
the one who put blinders
on my mind
she tells me I need to love again
knowing i've been lonely
she feeds me the ink
I need to be free
always there when I need her most
she speaks words of wisdom in my ear
tells me it's time I seek inspiration
sipping from rainbows
leaving behind the dank abyss
Published 27th Apr 2013
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27th Apr 2013 8:36pm
I love that "Sipping From Rainbows" all of those flavours.
A wonderful pen Crim, you still have your words my dear and they still fall beautifully. :)
A wonderful pen Crim, you still have your words my dear and they still fall beautifully. :)
27th Apr 2013 8:42pm
27th Apr 2013 8:49pm
Such a creator You are, O thee of fine mind!!!
A worthy Journey for such a cup, the dark Abyss easily keeps one in it's grasp, positive is this fine pen You wield here, pure excellence Crim!!!
A worthy Journey for such a cup, the dark Abyss easily keeps one in it's grasp, positive is this fine pen You wield here, pure excellence Crim!!!
27th Apr 2013 8:58pm
Well my sweet Crim I do believe I am witnessing you poetry's coming of age this is your finest piece to date. :-)
Red
Red
27th Apr 2013 9:54pm
27th Apr 2013 9:54pm
You have a beautifully creative mind,
your words have a spring and a dip
in their steps.
Well done.
your words have a spring and a dip
in their steps.
Well done.
27th Apr 2013 10:00pm
Anonymous
28th Apr 2013 4:15am
Very very nice..this is lovely. Your imagery and tone emanates in such a profound fashion.I'm totally feelin this..
28th Apr 2013 6:12pm
28th Apr 2013 8:27am
28th Apr 2013 6:13pm
28th Apr 2013 6:01pm
great work
love this:
I think a trickster
is at play
stealing the words
my lips wish to utter
sealing them before
they can tumble from my tongue
love this:
I think a trickster
is at play
stealing the words
my lips wish to utter
sealing them before
they can tumble from my tongue
28th Apr 2013 6:14pm
thank you lovely lady for the comment and add to your reading list..wishing you peace Crim :)
28th Apr 2013 7:16pm
she is the trickster
the one who put blinders
on my mind
she tells me I need to love again
A muse with conditions? Well, aren't they all. A beautiful read, Crim.
In my list.
the one who put blinders
on my mind
she tells me I need to love again
A muse with conditions? Well, aren't they all. A beautiful read, Crim.
In my list.
29th Apr 2013 5:22am
28th Apr 2013 8:07pm
My god woman.. how is it that when i need it you have it.. she eludes me too.. i've been lonely for years.. fuck . but at the end of the day even when alone at night i have a thought race through my head saying."thank god there is no one to tend too or tell me what to do or how to sleep or to get to bed or what i've done wrong".. cause let me tell you .. if i wasn't so bad in the daytime i wouldn't be so scared at night.. that is why i have two pits.. beasts.. that sleep at the foot of my bed and jump when they hear the wind blow.. i love you dark princess.. you take me where i need to be.. and the ink is oh so faithful to you for us..
29th Apr 2013 5:25am
My beautiful Mistress she is indeed there for us both..I understand the fear you speak of I have 3 pits myself..I allude this darkness as often as I can with drink..I love you my dark Mistress..love Crim
Anonymous
29th Apr 2013 7:36pm
beautiful crim...strider
29th Apr 2013 8:37pm
29th Apr 2013 8:07pm
Nice use of the words you really made me think how i can write more poetry...
29th Apr 2013 8:37pm
