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IT'S JUST A DREAM
you lay me
gently in the sand
and as for you
i held out my hands
there were pebbles
on your skin
as the ocean starts
glistening
there were birds
singing melodies
and soon
i ask
is this song for me
ohhh
i've never ever
felt so
inviting
i've come
to realize
its just a dream............
gently in the sand
and as for you
i held out my hands
there were pebbles
on your skin
as the ocean starts
glistening
there were birds
singing melodies
and soon
i ask
is this song for me
ohhh
i've never ever
felt so
inviting
i've come
to realize
its just a dream............
Published 27th Apr 2013
| Edited 28th Apr 2013
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27th Apr 2013 7:54am
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28th Apr 2013 5:01am
Niiiiiccceee wish you went on longer it was so good n I didn't want it to end lol
28th Apr 2013 5:39am
28th Apr 2013 8:33pm
28th Apr 2013 9:33pm
So thinking of the music of Enya, Kitaro, or Keiko Matsui when reading this.
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29th Apr 2013 00:19am
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17th May 2013 10:20pm
That was a Beautiful write sweets!!!
WELCOME TO THE DU!!!
Awesome read!
Sir Lancelott
WELCOME TO THE DU!!!
Awesome read!
Sir Lancelott
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21st Sep 2013 11:40pm
Love this piece similar to one I wrote sometime back.... dreams can be things we wish or want to happen in our real lives.. Love this piece. Keep up the good work.
