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i miss you

fading scent
how i wish i could put you in an everlasting candle
til the day i die

Written by misty_rose

(A gentle approach)

Published 11th Oct 2010

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11th Oct 2010 8:38pm

i know what you mean! nice rhyme :)

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Nice.

14th Oct 2010 5:56pm

I love the simplicity of it. It's beautiful.

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Perfect

Anonymous

2nd Nov 2010 8:22pm

This is simply ... PERFECT !!

4th Nov 2010 3:15pm

thankyou :)

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Sweet

Anonymous

2nd Jun 2011 7:15am

Love it :)

Re: i miss you

7th Feb 2014 5:20pm

Completely relatable

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