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i miss you

fading scent
how i wish i could put you in an everlasting candle
til the day i die




misty_rose
Written by misty_rose (A gentle approach)
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11th Oct 2010 8:38pm
i know what you mean! nice rhyme :)
wildcherry22
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Nice.
14th Oct 2010 5:56pm
I love the simplicity of it.  It's beautiful.
PierreTheMad
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Perfect
Anonymous
2nd Nov 2010 8:22pm
This is simply ... PERFECT !!
Anonymous
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(A gentle approach)
4th Nov 2010 3:15pm
thankyou :)
misty_rose
Sweet
Anonymous
2nd Jun 2011 7:15am
Love it :)
Anonymous
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Re: i miss you
7th Feb 2014 5:20pm
Completely relatable
sbgmag
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