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for travis
You were my friend…
Maybe I didn’t show you enough
Maybe I didn’t tell you I cared enough
Maybe I missed something I wasn’t meant to
Maybe this is god’s way of telling me off
Maybe this is what I deserve
But you didn’t deserve that
Not that… not Dead!
You deserved a loved filled life
One that I hoped I could of been a part of…
Now that’ll never happen
I loved and lost you
Maybe I didn’t show you enough
Maybe I didn’t tell you I cared enough
Maybe I missed something I wasn’t meant to
Maybe this is god’s way of telling me off
Maybe this is what I deserve
But you didn’t deserve that
Not that… not Dead!
You deserved a loved filled life
One that I hoped I could of been a part of…
Now that’ll never happen
I loved and lost you
Published 25th Apr 2013
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25th Apr 2013 6:35pm
2nd May 2013 3:27pm
10th May 2013 3:40pm
Just read all your poems and as a Grandad if this is about you, you have a great talent for taking the woes of the world on your shoulders and expressing them well.
However beautiffully written these things are not your fault so keep moving on and use your talent to express yourself. This is a great place for catharsism so a great read.
However beautiffully written these things are not your fault so keep moving on and use your talent to express yourself. This is a great place for catharsism so a great read.
13th May 2013 2:56pm
