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A little heat...
Chilled to the bone by winters discontent
Then come sit by my fire
Fiery heat of crimson red
Will thaw out that frozen desire
Sacrifice yourself to me willingly
Spread your body upon my pyre
Warm breath will kiss your flesh
Blue flames deftly lick you higher
Magma bubbles below your surface
Scalding tender white skin to pink
Volcanic release my hard sought reward
Sweet suckling taste of your liguid heat
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- Edited 9th Nov 2018 2:45pm
23rd Apr 2013 6:50am
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23rd Apr 2013 3:10pm
I agree with the comment above, you're clearly skilled n ur hot lil mind is intoxicating lol :)
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23rd Apr 2013 9:06pm
Once again a nice naughty erotic piece. Love it and can't wait to read more.
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24th Apr 2013 7:09am
There is a nice rhythm to the words, especially your verbs! Hope you enjoy DU!
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Anonymous
3rd May 2013 4:42am
Welcome to DU! Like this hot sexy write. As all of yours are. :)
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3rd May 2013 4:44am
Mmm...thank you flower girl....I love to share some heat!! I have something new cumming soon. Lol...xo