You Never Cared

Decent AABB rhyme scheme, except it broke at those last two lines. No rhyme while the rest did. It was like an awkward silence. 'There' and 'care' do rhyme, but with the added 'd', it doesn't really.
Nothing fancy, just hardcore anger with that touch of loneliness.
Only one bit of CC, you ended every line with a period.
I think it would be written more with a comma then a period, especially the last two lines, you don't want to start a sentence with 'because' as it isn't quite grammatically correct.
So, for example:
"You were never there,
Because you never cared."

A well written poem, just those couple of things I wanted to point out. Cheers :)

thank you and this poem deals a lot with my past. I do have anger and hatred toward the two people that were supposed to love me, but instead tried to kill me, and the two people also disowned me. I am adopted

I am very sorry for your past, I hope you have a better future ahead of you :) if you ever want to chat, just message me :)
Peace.

thank you :)

the feeling of noone caring.feeling utterly alone.it makes life unbearable.being in a room full of people and still feel completely alone.i seriously can relate,no doubt.

Shut the fuck up illogical Logic this isn't english class!!!

Accualy those two words do rhyme if you want my input. It is something called approximate rhyme. Very deep poem. Having no one care is like the darkest depths of hell. I dont like feeling abandoned (for lack of a better word) but you have a very good poem.