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Raven
What Has Happend To you?
And All Of Your Grace...
You've Lost Your Sanity..
Humanity All The Same...!
Time Has Consumed you...
Aged your Pretty Face,
Don't Worry.. My Imprint Is Gone.
Like The Beauty In Your Song!
~Not finished. About a girl... Uhh, I'd Like Critism And Some Ideas :D
And All Of Your Grace...
You've Lost Your Sanity..
Humanity All The Same...!
Time Has Consumed you...
Aged your Pretty Face,
Don't Worry.. My Imprint Is Gone.
Like The Beauty In Your Song!
~Not finished. About a girl... Uhh, I'd Like Critism And Some Ideas :D
Published 22nd Apr 2013
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Is there a reason why you capitalize the first letter of everyword (space button not working... don't ask, cuz I don't know). Sorry, looking back I realize that that sounded offensive, I meant it as an honest question. By the way, good start.
23rd Apr 2013 7:07pm
My ex sorta taught me how to type in general, I'm trying to break the habit of doing it.. it seems as if it hurts my hands when I DON'T type that way.
23rd Apr 2013 7:09pm
23rd Apr 2013 8:09pm
