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Entry 1
How long will it take you to see? Everything you do is killing me. I shed a thousand tears each day.. waiting... just waisting my time on you. Oh Brian, when will you see? Everything you say... Do... Or think.. is killing me.
~Not really a poem, just some feelings ;-;
~Not really a poem, just some feelings ;-;
Published 22nd Apr 2013
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9th Sep 2013 7:46pm
Even though you said it isn't, I still get a sense of poetic structure in this :)
3rd Oct 2013 12:48pm
