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I Screamed Ohhh God Please Fuck Me
Nibbling my painted toes
working your way up to
my thighs
I want your mouth on my
pussy my hips lift me to
you as your tongue sinks
deeper into me
My hands clutching the
sheets while my body
shutters with pleasure
Your tongue is a machine
twisting in every direction
circling my bean getting
it harder
Breathing in my heat
with every suckle of
your mouth
My nipples harden under
your touch as you pinch
and massage them
Grabbing the head board
as I push my pussy into
your face
Freeing my orgasm from
me taking every drop
lapping my moist slit
as I quiver
With my engorged clit
and my soaked pussy
I shout to the sky Oh
God please fuck me now
working your way up to
my thighs
I want your mouth on my
pussy my hips lift me to
you as your tongue sinks
deeper into me
My hands clutching the
sheets while my body
shutters with pleasure
Your tongue is a machine
twisting in every direction
circling my bean getting
it harder
Breathing in my heat
with every suckle of
your mouth
My nipples harden under
your touch as you pinch
and massage them
Grabbing the head board
as I push my pussy into
your face
Freeing my orgasm from
me taking every drop
lapping my moist slit
as I quiver
With my engorged clit
and my soaked pussy
I shout to the sky Oh
God please fuck me now
Written by
tommielynn
(Tommie Lynn)
Published 22nd Apr 2013
| Edited 27th Sep 2013
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Re: I Screamed Ohhh God Please Fuck Me
22nd Apr 2013 10:22am
Sensual oral piece.
Should not the first word of verse three's third line read "shudders"?
Should not the first word of verse three's third line read "shudders"?
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re: Re: I Screamed Ohhh God Please Fuck Me
22nd Apr 2013 10:27am
Re: I Screamed Ohhh God Please Fuck Me
22nd Apr 2013 1:22pm
Another erotic and well-penned piece. (Damn, girl, I love how you fill my head with ideas... and the rest of my body with swashing hormones!) ;-)
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re: Re: I Screamed Ohhh God Please Fuck Me
22nd Apr 2013 2:04pm
Lovegood you are too kind!I'm overflowing with ideas..I am happy I fill your head and I am happy you like it!Thank you ;-)
Re: I Screamed Ohhh God Please Fuck Me
22nd Apr 2013 4:43pm
re: Re: I Screamed Ohhh God Please Fuck Me
22nd Apr 2013 4:52pm
Re: I Screamed Ohhh God Please Fuck Me
Anonymous
22nd Apr 2013 5:02pm
tommielynn,
I like your sense of timing here. Yes, I think you are right on the bean ; ) Enoyed!
tornado
I like your sense of timing here. Yes, I think you are right on the bean ; ) Enoyed!
tornado
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22nd Apr 2013 5:09pm
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22nd Apr 2013 10:20pm
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23rd Apr 2013 1:37pm
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27th Apr 2013 10:53pm
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Re: I Screamed Ohhh God Please Fuck Me
17th Dec 2013 9:20pm
i never knew
but just imagined
why gals love to be lesbians
and yet desire a long rod of god to fuck
from heaven
you r the most sexy one
who I'm sure has by all been taken
vaginas and steely long pipes
which hit hard
but softy rides
u do excite
have another good ride astride
god may cum too
but just imagined
why gals love to be lesbians
and yet desire a long rod of god to fuck
from heaven
you r the most sexy one
who I'm sure has by all been taken
vaginas and steely long pipes
which hit hard
but softy rides
u do excite
have another good ride astride
god may cum too
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re: Re: I Screamed Ohhh God Please Fuck Me
17th Dec 2013 9:23pm
Re: I Screamed Ohhh God Please Fuck Me
17th Dec 2013 9:37pm
i love to see u
in those verses
just imagine
what will happen
in reality
ur worth a 1000 poets here
in those verses
just imagine
what will happen
in reality
ur worth a 1000 poets here
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31st Dec 2014 1:57am
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31st Dec 2014 1:59am
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31st Dec 2014 2:06am
Re. I Screamed Ohhh God Please Fuck Me
12th Feb 2016 3:58am
This was really good! Loved that he made you cum and then begged to be fucked. Excellent erotica!
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