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The Shower
Thought's are dancing through my mind, visions of bodies innertwined, hot steamy showers water dripping down our back as you washed away the dirt and sweat from our moment of escasty... Glass fogged up, air so thick I can barely breath, fingertips tracing the lines of my body now covered in suds, laughing as you pop the bubbles.... filling your hands to rinse me clean, so pure, so suductive you seem to me... you tease me with your innocent looks, and taunt me with you wondering eyes...I want to take you as you are and then we can start all over...and this time I wash you!
By: R Fuller 10-8-2010
By: R Fuller 10-8-2010
Published 8th Oct 2010
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9th Oct 2010 7:04pm
10th Oct 2010 10:00pm
12th Oct 2010 11:38pm
always a good subject :) you definitely set the scene like a well thought out porno.
Seriously though, sex in the shower is hard to beat and you definitely brought up some good memories with this one, thanks *thumbs up*
Seriously though, sex in the shower is hard to beat and you definitely brought up some good memories with this one, thanks *thumbs up*
13th Oct 2010 00:12am
4th Nov 2010 7:07pm
5th Nov 2010 3:04pm
thanks! I really enjoyed writting this one, it has great memories attatched with it lol...
