deepundergroundpoetry.com
the tunnel
ah ah ah
im close
so close
but im miles away from you
you left a hole in my heart
and i try to fill it
and you know what with
till my blood runs white and sticky
and my voice is barely a whisper
but with every gasp and moan
every hitched breath
every thrust against the cold wall
and every bite, bruise, and pull of hair
that little crack in my soul
becomes a cavernous tunnel
waiting to be filled
with something bigger
im close
so close
but im miles away from you
you left a hole in my heart
and i try to fill it
and you know what with
till my blood runs white and sticky
and my voice is barely a whisper
but with every gasp and moan
every hitched breath
every thrust against the cold wall
and every bite, bruise, and pull of hair
that little crack in my soul
becomes a cavernous tunnel
waiting to be filled
with something bigger
Published 19th Apr 2013
| Edited 15th Dec 2014
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 1
reading list entries 0
comments 3
reads 762
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Anonymous
19th Apr 2013 3:17am
I won't lie, this is a striking piece. There's no fluff, it's well organized/written, and it evokes sympathy for the "speaker".
That being said, I must also admit to being deeply disturbed that this comes from the pen of a 14yr old girl. I've got one of those, exactly. Middle child. And I wouldn't blink before killing any who dared. Makes me wonder where your protector is.
That being said, I must also admit to being deeply disturbed that this comes from the pen of a 14yr old girl. I've got one of those, exactly. Middle child. And I wouldn't blink before killing any who dared. Makes me wonder where your protector is.
19th Apr 2013 4:22am
19th Apr 2013 4:55am
