deepundergroundpoetry.com
Backwards
That gnileef
Of unsurpressed raef
Of aionirap
Of enilanerda
That slowly sehsur
And sehsug
Through your black sniev
When all you raeh is mutters
And all you ees is faded images
In this deep dark state of noisufnuc
As you elggurts
As you psag
As you ekohc
You begin to leef
An odd etats
Where enoyreve
Where gnihtyreve
Is sdrawkcab
And there's gnihton
That you can od
Or yas
To stop it.
(ruoY emit si pu.)
Of unsurpressed raef
Of aionirap
Of enilanerda
That slowly sehsur
And sehsug
Through your black sniev
When all you raeh is mutters
And all you ees is faded images
In this deep dark state of noisufnuc
As you elggurts
As you psag
As you ekohc
You begin to leef
An odd etats
Where enoyreve
Where gnihtyreve
Is sdrawkcab
And there's gnihton
That you can od
Or yas
To stop it.
(ruoY emit si pu.)
Published 6th Oct 2010
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 0
reading list entries 0
comments 3
reads 859
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
7th Oct 2010 3:14am
I suppose I'm one of the smart ones, lol. I loved the idea of having the ending words backwards, a beautifully unique idea that I haven't seen done before! Great job. Virtual high-five anyone? :p
23rd Oct 2010 5:32am
Yea pretty genius of doing the backwards, even though it took me awhile to realize that aionirap wasn't a word or typo. Congrats.
