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.:An AMERICAN Pastime: Foul Ball Trying To Be A Home Run:.
(darn, you's such a fox)
got me stepping lively into
that batter’s box
with most popular pop ups
it’s them aces one faces
they usually don’t allow us to clear them bases
but my eyes were eyeballing you
they’d been scoping
maybe justa tad too early to do any major league hoping
but with you…I’m definitely-on-tha-tip-about-eloping
hmmm maybe tomorrow?
scarf an ounce, flat out bounce then
smoke up our sorrow
play @it independent like Bogie in Key Largo
(we won’t need no cargo)
improve our swing & everything
make up for the happy day-night we could be having right now
matter fact with some tact you could probably show me how
heck…let me grab that beach towel
cool things can cum 'round for a fan who waits
like a ball caught foul
::call it the fates
damn…me with you, I’m a genius…oh wow!
who would’ve thought we could
do this right now?
Published 15th Apr 2013
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Anonymous
15th Apr 2013 8:32pm
another gem kriticool
strider
strider
15th Apr 2013 11:00pm
Anonymous
15th Apr 2013 9:48pm
sounds like this party was pre-game :-)
fluid write, woven with a near childlike excitement and a hint of naughty-
great work :-)
fluid write, woven with a near childlike excitement and a hint of naughty-
great work :-)
15th Apr 2013 11:05pm
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hahaha.. pre-game; that's a good one!!
strike tre called by miki
haha caught lookin
;-)
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hahaha.. pre-game; that's a good one!!
strike tre called by miki
haha caught lookin
;-)
16th Apr 2013 11:08am
16th Apr 2013 6:56pm
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ha. interesting, any specific one in particular?
in general, the influence remains prevalent
least in my rites.. i'd like to think so
thanks 4 chkn one - three
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ha. interesting, any specific one in particular?
in general, the influence remains prevalent
least in my rites.. i'd like to think so
thanks 4 chkn one - three
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16th Apr 2013 7:04pm
honestly not my type of music... same beats... over new lyrics... i wouldn't able to tell the difference... though i like listening to some on occasion.
but pick one that's really nice and everyone loves, this would be that. :D
but pick one that's really nice and everyone loves, this would be that. :D
16th Apr 2013 7:26pm
