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.:The Seating of Raw Pupils:.
Class assist…who’s pissed?
To make the case…this place. Metaphorically
It’s in need of an Exodus. No more wrecks with this…
Forward. The gathering of the best of scruples…Ever onward
Private v. Public v. Charter…tell us
Who’s smarter?
I would wager that we’re All-Human.
Our Plan should reflect this… That we’re all…in this…together
So maybe tomorrow we’ll go out and gather
Why? Because it matters
Vouchers v. Increased taxes…
Support should be for whatever improves them classes
Each updated book to improve what’s shook
Let’s take a clean-it up look..
Perhaps star jack some cart o’ facts
Recorders, their recordings that’ll provide what’s exact,
Those who are true while still knowing a few…knowing
They’re only looking out for themselves and not you
We gotta end the treachery that’s found in the schism
This is the ABC’s of a Correct-O-Prism
We need Unity Eyes, not Union Lies
Folks who can accurately assess our struggle
Schools are a place where there’s no need for trouble
Absolutely no need for a guarded (A+)
However the obtaining of a few is still a must
At least an honest & thorough attempt
To that end…nobody from *The Trilogy’s exempt
Students – Parents - Teachers*
No longer acceptable as indifferent creatures
All should continue to be right on and.. Write on the same page
PROGRESS… It goes forward to the Graduate’s Stage
Break - Time?
No, It ain’t over ‘til it’s over
Class then dismissed! Then the Dance in The Clover
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Published 16th Apr 2013
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Anonymous
16th Apr 2013 2:44am
Kriticool deep...strider
16th Apr 2013 6:46pm
16th Apr 2013 10:59am
too deep... almost flipping me out to read...
but for the first two stanzas... very thought provoking.
but for the first two stanzas... very thought provoking.
16th Apr 2013 7:19pm
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accessibility? i suppose comparatively could be a "reach"...oh well, we're still workin onnit
its a treatise related to the crisis found in alotta urban school systems & settings. i'm attempting to pen what i've viewed personally, some hearsay and research.
Its alot goin and not goin on... from total neglect to overt indoctrination.
at the very least, glad u found it provocative
thanks for your view
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accessibility? i suppose comparatively could be a "reach"...oh well, we're still workin onnit
its a treatise related to the crisis found in alotta urban school systems & settings. i'm attempting to pen what i've viewed personally, some hearsay and research.
Its alot goin and not goin on... from total neglect to overt indoctrination.
at the very least, glad u found it provocative
thanks for your view
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shouldn't you be a journalist or an NGO worker?
i have a friend in hyd who would have you right where you stand.
yeah, she would definitely love this.
will forward. :D
i have a friend in hyd who would have you right where you stand.
yeah, she would definitely love this.
will forward. :D
17th Apr 2013 3:52am
I agree with Poem here, great way to break down the breaking down of our schools. Deep troubling stuff, needs to be fixed, or our future's sunk
Much Love
G
Much Love
G
17th Apr 2013 8:36pm
20th Apr 2013 1:52am
Insightful and a great conscious write!
Some of my favs:
Vouchers v. Increased taxes…
Support should be for whatever improves them classes
Each updated book to improve what’s shook
Let’s take a clean-it up look..
Perhaps star jack some cart o’ facts
Recorders, their recordings that’ll provide what’s exact,
Those who are true while still knowing a few…knowing
They’re only looking out for themselves and not you
We gotta end the treachery that’s found in the schism
This is the ABC’s of a Correct-O-Prism
We need Unity Eyes, not Union Lies
Folks who can accurately assess our struggle
Schools are a place where there’s no need for trouble
Absolutely no need for a guarded (A+)
You go girl!:) I thoroughly enjoyed!!!:)
Some of my favs:
Vouchers v. Increased taxes…
Support should be for whatever improves them classes
Each updated book to improve what’s shook
Let’s take a clean-it up look..
Perhaps star jack some cart o’ facts
Recorders, their recordings that’ll provide what’s exact,
Those who are true while still knowing a few…knowing
They’re only looking out for themselves and not you
We gotta end the treachery that’s found in the schism
This is the ABC’s of a Correct-O-Prism
We need Unity Eyes, not Union Lies
Folks who can accurately assess our struggle
Schools are a place where there’s no need for trouble
Absolutely no need for a guarded (A+)
You go girl!:) I thoroughly enjoyed!!!:)
