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judgment
people always feelin they can tell you what to do
its not so often that you'll find the ones that are supportin you
I find it crazy all the hate its like it all just circulates
from you to me to her to him then finds its way to me again
were seeking love from all our friends but secretly were judging them
so see it all goes back to you, you judge them first they judge you too
this cycles never gonna break cause its a never ending thing
don't complain cause you judge too just take a look around
the thoughts you have inside your head that's called judgment
you get it now?
so before you get offended or blame others for your faults
claiming that judgment finds you realize that you could be the cause
its not so often that you'll find the ones that are supportin you
I find it crazy all the hate its like it all just circulates
from you to me to her to him then finds its way to me again
were seeking love from all our friends but secretly were judging them
so see it all goes back to you, you judge them first they judge you too
this cycles never gonna break cause its a never ending thing
don't complain cause you judge too just take a look around
the thoughts you have inside your head that's called judgment
you get it now?
so before you get offended or blame others for your faults
claiming that judgment finds you realize that you could be the cause
Published 11th Apr 2013
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11th Apr 2013 11:01pm
I like this piece.
Your poem is more of a free verse
yet there's a slight rhyme to it.
The first two lines rhyme
then it gets scattered.
You could make it longer
by using the chant method.
The most important thing
the message.
The best part is the message.
Your poem is more of a free verse
yet there's a slight rhyme to it.
The first two lines rhyme
then it gets scattered.
You could make it longer
by using the chant method.
The most important thing
the message.
The best part is the message.
11th Apr 2013 11:43pm
Thank you, and I get what youre saying. I really didn't put much effort at all into this. I just wrote something cause I wanted to see how this site worked and stuff.
