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master baiter cuts bait
& flies,wind-swiftly to swim
wit shark-biznus death
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laugh at preceding
poom,laugh so hard,piss me pants,
laugh at own wet joke
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[font=Times New Roman]laughing so's not to
proceed direct-to-death,but
no-less die laughing
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haiku rolls'n'flows
flowrollin as'per don't know
what t'fckn Do
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laugh-at-this,laugh-at-
that,blood spurts free from heart'ache
heart'break bleeds much more
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Published 10th Apr 2013
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11th Apr 2013 6:49pm
honestly
i want to add everyone of your poems to my reading list.
you should publish a whole book
i'd buy it.
i want to add everyone of your poems to my reading list.
you should publish a whole book
i'd buy it.
11th Apr 2013 7:16pm
g'oddbless ye dearest---- book publishin business is a horrible nasty place (tho not so diff as near kapitalist self-important business) & eye can no longer think'bout playn-th-game...........
over the years have had numerous well-meaning souls volunteer to 'agent' me...all slippin into disappearedness
over the years have had numerous well-meaning souls volunteer to 'agent' me...all slippin into disappearedness
11th Apr 2013 7:20pm
PS
y'd have the Longest Reading-List in DUP history -
eye dare ye !
y'd have the Longest Reading-List in DUP history -
eye dare ye !
11th Apr 2013 6:51pm
p.s
it's that opening part that really got me on this one.
"master baiter cuts bait"
what a start =]
it's that opening part that really got me on this one.
"master baiter cuts bait"
what a start =]
11th Apr 2013 7:17pm
