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Five Day Thoughts
i've been thinking about
what people want to read
is it the first line
is it the title
am i doing it wrong?
i've been thinking about thoughts
ha
my mind
is a confusing place
is it the repetition of the
words
word
wor
wo
w
or the l e t t e r s
stop reading
and look around
what do you see
now look back
to these words
written just
for you
do they mean
something different
now
think
or
let your mind wander
and see what you find
because
it could be great
what people want to read
is it the first line
is it the title
am i doing it wrong?
i've been thinking about thoughts
ha
my mind
is a confusing place
is it the repetition of the
words
word
wor
wo
w
or the l e t t e r s
stop reading
and look around
what do you see
now look back
to these words
written just
for you
do they mean
something different
now
think
or
let your mind wander
and see what you find
because
it could be great
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