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Five Day Thoughts

i've been thinking about
what people want to read

is it the first line

is it the title

am i doing it wrong?

i've been thinking about thoughts
ha
my mind
is a confusing place

is it the repetition of the
words
word
wor
wo
w

or the l e t t e r s

stop reading
and look around

what do you see

now look back
to these words
written just
for you

do they mean
something different
now

think
or
let your mind wander

and see what you find
because

it could be great
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