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Truck Trails
Riding along next to him real close
my hand on his bulging center
He controls the truck with one
hand as the other is stuffed in my jeans
Sun shining hot outside and inside we
heat up
Windows down and music going as
we drive down the dirt road
I free his raging erection from
it's denim captor and ease my hand
up and down gently
Slowly pulling over we come to a
stop and he tilts the wheel up
allowing for more space
With his cock already out he grabs
it stroking it nodding for me to
get on and hold on
My jeans are off and I'm mounting
him his dick gliding into me like
a knife in hot butter
His hands grab the wheel and he lifts
into my pussy hard
My hands grab the head rest and I
push down onto him
With every forceful push my ass hits
the wheel
He growls and thanks God for my
incredible hot tight pussy
Then tells me he's about to cum in
that pussy he loves so much
Shooting straight inside of me
I feel every squirt pump
Peeling his hands off the wheel
he places them on my ass
and gives my nose a peck
As I dismount and pull my jeans
on I tell him to drive on the
ride is far from over
my hand on his bulging center
He controls the truck with one
hand as the other is stuffed in my jeans
Sun shining hot outside and inside we
heat up
Windows down and music going as
we drive down the dirt road
I free his raging erection from
it's denim captor and ease my hand
up and down gently
Slowly pulling over we come to a
stop and he tilts the wheel up
allowing for more space
With his cock already out he grabs
it stroking it nodding for me to
get on and hold on
My jeans are off and I'm mounting
him his dick gliding into me like
a knife in hot butter
His hands grab the wheel and he lifts
into my pussy hard
My hands grab the head rest and I
push down onto him
With every forceful push my ass hits
the wheel
He growls and thanks God for my
incredible hot tight pussy
Then tells me he's about to cum in
that pussy he loves so much
Shooting straight inside of me
I feel every squirt pump
Peeling his hands off the wheel
he places them on my ass
and gives my nose a peck
As I dismount and pull my jeans
on I tell him to drive on the
ride is far from over
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Re: Truck Trails
Ride 'em, cowgirl ;) Car sex is awesome, just like this write! I could really feel the heat as these two lovers drove down the dirt road. I'm the beginning you really established well that they want each other BAD by having them both touching each other while the truck is still moving-this makes the sex at the end even hotter! I love the line "...his dick gliding into me like a knife in hot butter..." Wow, she is wet! I love that feeling. All the description of how they are positioned in the seat really helps the visual as she rides him. I also love "Shooting straight inside me, I feel every squirt pump." Wonderful ending, and even leaving it open for more at the end ;) Nice work Tommie!
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9th Apr 2013 5:10pm
The fun I had!!!Hahahaa ;) Car sex IS awesome, summer time cruising was the best...so many places to go when you live in the woods.He was country! ;)
I always love when you comment Deepest_Fantasy ;-)
I always love when you comment Deepest_Fantasy ;-)
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9th Apr 2013 6:02pm
I love the woods, so peaceful. Cruising around in them for hours, finding good spots for sex..sounds like a good time!
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Re: Truck Trails
9th Apr 2013 5:48pm
My kind of memory, makes my mind wander.
Vivid imagery, nice hot steamy write Tommielynn. :)
Vivid imagery, nice hot steamy write Tommielynn. :)
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9th Apr 2013 9:15pm
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9th Apr 2013 7:08pm
I made the mistake of reading this at work. Now I've got to get rid of this raging bulge before heading into a board meeting!
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Anonymous
9th Apr 2013 11:07pm
Absolutely terrific!

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Re: Truck Trails
11th Apr 2013 6:49am
Couldn't help but read this one again. (It's okay, I'm home and now and in bed... no board meeting boner to deal with.)
My only suggestion... since "truck" and "fuck" rhyme, I may have used the f-word in the title somehow. Or not. Either way it's a great piece: vivid, erotic, compelling, exquisite.
My only suggestion... since "truck" and "fuck" rhyme, I may have used the f-word in the title somehow. Or not. Either way it's a great piece: vivid, erotic, compelling, exquisite.
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11th Apr 2013 1:53pm