deepundergroundpoetry.com
truest love
once i was somebody's wife
but things didn't turn out right
i never thought i was real domesticated
but when it was all over
i was most certainly educated on the
evil ways a man can be
i still believe in love
though the scars he left went deep
my life is changed but
my truest love is still writing poetry
so when someone says
something i wrote has made them smile
it touches my heart very deeply
perhaps i have helped
them even in a small way to go on
writing is part of
my soul's work and i will write until
the day that i take my last breath
i write not for my
ego's sake but for a much higher purpose
because my greatest wish
is that i might leave the world
a better place by sharing
a part of my soul's stirrings
but things didn't turn out right
i never thought i was real domesticated
but when it was all over
i was most certainly educated on the
evil ways a man can be
i still believe in love
though the scars he left went deep
my life is changed but
my truest love is still writing poetry
so when someone says
something i wrote has made them smile
it touches my heart very deeply
perhaps i have helped
them even in a small way to go on
writing is part of
my soul's work and i will write until
the day that i take my last breath
i write not for my
ego's sake but for a much higher purpose
because my greatest wish
is that i might leave the world
a better place by sharing
a part of my soul's stirrings
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 7
reading list entries 0
comments 14
reads 801
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re: truest love
8th Apr 2013 00:11am
Oh Faith, you are amazing! Your words have helped me and opened my eyes to new horizons. Thank you!
1
re: Re: truest love
8th Apr 2013 00:35am
I'm both honored and humbled by your wonderful remarks, Amazon. I'm thrilled to see you poeing these days and I assure you the pleasure is mine!
Faith
Faith
Re: truest love
8th Apr 2013 00:17am
re: Re: truest love
8th Apr 2013 00:36am
Re: truest love
Anonymous
8th Apr 2013 6:36am
I can relate to your words, particularly in the first stanza, only too well, Faith. It all resonates!! This is a finely written/expressed poem, and your poetry, I believe, touches hearts deeply. Touches mine, for sure! Keep up the great work, my friend! xoxo
Carlene :)
Carlene :)
1
re: Re: truest love
8th Apr 2013 3:24pm
Thank you so much, Carlene. You just made my heart smile! I'm honored you feel that way. :)
Faith
Faith
Re: truest love
8th Apr 2013 5:32pm
re: Re: truest love
8th Apr 2013 5:35pm
Re: truest love
8th Apr 2013 8:01pm
re: Re: truest love
9th Apr 2013 8:18pm
Wow! Thank you very much, Marcus. I'm thrilled you feel that way! xo
Faith
Faith
Re: truest love
Anonymous
2nd May 2013 2:56am
How feel your words here. Your beautiful words touch more people than you may ever know. I love your poems and honored we are friends. You are such a strong and beautiful person. Thank you for sharing! DU is a better place cause you are here. :)
1
re: Re: truest love
2nd May 2013 8:19pm
Hi, there! I haven't been on here for a while but decided to stop in this afternoon. I'm very touched by your comments. I have really missed you.
You are a true friend. I hope everything is going well with you. :)
You are a true friend. I hope everything is going well with you. :)
Re: truest love
Anonymous
3rd May 2013 11:04pm
<< post removed >>
re: Re: truest love
7th May 2013 3:31pm
Thank you so much, Gabe. I've been away for a while and so good to see you have stopped to read my poem. I've missed you. Faith