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Oft to See Off t'Sea

mad
badpoet capp'ed mad
madder'n all thee
hatters'o hell \ well
being-[that]-as-it-may,
sway
wit � � �thee zounding
� � � sound
� �waves
a'sea
may
�nakedrown
� � �in th'blindingwhite
� � � � � f o a m
by accident by incident shiply aban
doned �by allotted waysmeans
� �disfortuned in haste,yet
waste
no thing, yet all yet all a'gently
sinking down,bottom of all
� � � � �dredgery [cum dreadery]
fr'acture com
pounding, then snappin like them
weebitty sapling weakling �t w I g s

let I let eye tickle thy torments
til yr nectarlips smile'a'wildly
wide
before this ocean'grace sucks me off-out-t'sea
& under
[& under
� weego)

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Written by dkzksaxxas_DanielX

(DadaDoggyDannyKozakSaxfn)

Published 7th Apr 2013

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Re: Oft to See Off t'Sea

Anonymous

7th Apr 2013 6:00pm

I love the way you arranged the words in this poem. I love the way you took liberties with the words. This demonstrates both talent and creativity.

dkzksaxxas_DanielX (DadaDoggyDannyKozakSaxfn)

7th Apr 2013 6:08pm

taking sometimes outrageous,ridiculous 'liberties' wit
words, is, I suppose, 'my-stock-in-trade'(but wit No Commercial Potential)....

AND...I do a lot of it

thankyou verymuch for 'reading me' as you have