Submissions by freddwzz (Naked Satirist)
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poet Introduction
pro-satire f u serious donkeys
STORY POEM
Published
21st May 2012 4:38am
21st May 2012 4:38am
Adam and Eve
In the beginning God created the heavens and the earth
Night and day, the seas, the stars, creatures
All in just five days but with no one to appreciate it.
Thy all knowing Almighty, pondered and pondered
Answered through the looking glass,
God
Holy thou art!
Me, Myself, and I!
I shall create to praise Me
but no one other than
I shall possess the name of divine,
immortality and deserving glory!
Dust and mud with thy mystical rites, the first man rose in the image of thee Lord and was given the name "Adam".
...
Night and day, the seas, the stars, creatures
All in just five days but with no one to appreciate it.
Thy all knowing Almighty, pondered and pondered
Answered through the looking glass,
God
Holy thou art!
Me, Myself, and I!
I shall create to praise Me
but no one other than
I shall possess the name of divine,
immortality and deserving glory!
Dust and mud with thy mystical rites, the first man rose in the image of thee Lord and was given the name "Adam".
...
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NON-FICTION PROSE
Published
19th May 2012 10:46pm
19th May 2012 10:46pm
Night Terror
As i lay on my bed
Sideways,
how I've always slept
A distinct inclement wind swept
then on my bed it crept
It weighs
sank the bed a tad
Malicious gaze, i felt
on my back
Smooth strands of hair
brushed across my neck
and a breath of jasmine scent
gently blown on my ear
i vaguely smelled and heard
convinced,
another shares my bed
My guts shrank and shrank
then came unceasing screams in my head
so agonizing it can shatter souls
wish an end to this torment
cast the die
i snapped a...
Sideways,
how I've always slept
A distinct inclement wind swept
then on my bed it crept
It weighs
sank the bed a tad
Malicious gaze, i felt
on my back
Smooth strands of hair
brushed across my neck
and a breath of jasmine scent
gently blown on my ear
i vaguely smelled and heard
convinced,
another shares my bed
My guts shrank and shrank
then came unceasing screams in my head
so agonizing it can shatter souls
wish an end to this torment
cast the die
i snapped a...
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SPIRITUAL POEM
Published
19th May 2012 4:30pm
19th May 2012 4:30pm
If your joy there to be found
Beyond the clouds
of purest white
Visible in the afterlife
Stood a floating isle
of pure rainbow hues, untainted
There lives a Lord,
with obsessive cleaniness disorder
But a lazy sloth he is
He doesn't clean, rather
He flings the tainted
Forever out of his sight
Adequate he finds
So take a bath
before your soul rise
If your joy
There to be found
of purest white
Visible in the afterlife
Stood a floating isle
of pure rainbow hues, untainted
There lives a Lord,
with obsessive cleaniness disorder
But a lazy sloth he is
He doesn't clean, rather
He flings the tainted
Forever out of his sight
Adequate he finds
So take a bath
before your soul rise
If your joy
There to be found
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UPBEAT INSPIRATIONAL POEM
Published
17th May 2012 10:56am
17th May 2012 10:56am
Paradise, when one dies
So your mom died
now shes in paradise
where families reunite
never again terrorized
Thats what you tell
But why do you cry?
As if a cello's depressing whine
On an event clearly of joy
blessed are those who mourn
A make yourself feel better
Cliche full of shit.
now shes in paradise
where families reunite
never again terrorized
Thats what you tell
But why do you cry?
As if a cello's depressing whine
On an event clearly of joy
blessed are those who mourn
A make yourself feel better
Cliche full of shit.
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DARK POEM
Published
16th May 2012 7:58am
16th May 2012 7:58am
Dark and Twisted Man
these harbringer of filth
hacked off our limbs
burned them to cinder
ripped off our green hairs
made it their shelter
Edify themselves
Undubious they're affirm
That we cannot feel
that poor fauna
blasphemous, what she went through
whilst they know she can feel
still they drove a spear into her mouth
and right through her arse
burned on unforgiving flame
til it suits their peculiar taste
juicy or less juicy
they then consume
Undubious they're affirm
That faunae are food
given to them...
hacked off our limbs
burned them to cinder
ripped off our green hairs
made it their shelter
Edify themselves
Undubious they're affirm
That we cannot feel
that poor fauna
blasphemous, what she went through
whilst they know she can feel
still they drove a spear into her mouth
and right through her arse
burned on unforgiving flame
til it suits their peculiar taste
juicy or less juicy
they then consume
Undubious they're affirm
That faunae are food
given to them...
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3 Comments
SONG LYRICS
Published
14th May 2012 2:18am
14th May 2012 2:18am
DU's Cinny
Cinny
Her life was scanty merry
Weather through shame, maimed
Jiggly perservering flames
Cinny
But still galiently jolly
Waging no war, never she defame
pansophy she gained
Cinny Cinny Cinny
Chucked candy, more coffee
Bitter but sophisticate
The lingering taste
rid of lucscious waste
Cinny Cinny Cinny
She, herself and her
Undeluded from egoist knights
Damsel never again distress
Her life was scanty merry
Weather through shame, maimed
Jiggly perservering flames
Cinny
But still galiently jolly
Waging no war, never she defame
pansophy she gained
Cinny Cinny Cinny
Chucked candy, more coffee
Bitter but sophisticate
The lingering taste
rid of lucscious waste
Cinny Cinny Cinny
She, herself and her
Undeluded from egoist knights
Damsel never again distress
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STORY POEM
Published
13th May 2012 2:58pm
13th May 2012 2:58pm
Grace
Goddess I'd glimpse,
on my recurring dreams
Yearn for her, materialized,
a collection, my possesion.
Though chance no being, worthy,
of her crowning beauty.
Either imperfect or incomplete.
Ungodly ephemeral, decaying.
Fuck it, I'll just create my own;
Immortal beauty.
"Grace" her name, shall be
Now the physical form
Where shall I begin?
Forgotten whores, non will miss
Praise the lord,
forthwith commencement, my quest
A blessing bestowed upon me, a crucial piece.
A whore,
Angelic facial features...
on my recurring dreams
Yearn for her, materialized,
a collection, my possesion.
Though chance no being, worthy,
of her crowning beauty.
Either imperfect or incomplete.
Ungodly ephemeral, decaying.
Fuck it, I'll just create my own;
Immortal beauty.
"Grace" her name, shall be
Now the physical form
Where shall I begin?
Forgotten whores, non will miss
Praise the lord,
forthwith commencement, my quest
A blessing bestowed upon me, a crucial piece.
A whore,
Angelic facial features...
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SPIRITUAL POEM
Published
12th May 2012 9:35am
12th May 2012 9:35am
Singularism - Human
Loving another,
an abstract emotion
i yet apperceive
a dogma
i give no accredit
psychosis narcissist
In the name of Love
blood red
seldom rose red
sanctimonious debauchee
In the name of Love
lust for skin
never intellect
mentertained,
when love ends in chaos
In the name of love
Helen;
God;
hermetic sanity
without worries
overwhelming jealousy;
sleepless night
when you are not by me
anguish thoughts
fete
anarchy...
an abstract emotion
i yet apperceive
a dogma
i give no accredit
psychosis narcissist
In the name of Love
blood red
seldom rose red
sanctimonious debauchee
In the name of Love
lust for skin
never intellect
mentertained,
when love ends in chaos
In the name of love
Helen;
God;
hermetic sanity
without worries
overwhelming jealousy;
sleepless night
when you are not by me
anguish thoughts
fete
anarchy...
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STORY POEM
Published
9th May 2012 9:15am
9th May 2012 9:15am
Submission for "Adventure" competition
A passion for mystery
Ferret hidden wonders
What is beyond those puffy white haze
Flew beyond it, faced no halt
A majestic black, solemn and forlorn
Boundless nightmare should I travel forth
...Mysteries...Hidden Wonders...
Adventurous spirit, no rebuff
"To the edge, here i come"
Dodged rolling stones
Soared through this vast darkness
A sign of life!
Shining spirit glowing merciful light,
A benign presence
'Twas unable to speak
Stayed by herside, kept me warm
After a campanionless travel
Rejoice for a...
Ferret hidden wonders
What is beyond those puffy white haze
Flew beyond it, faced no halt
A majestic black, solemn and forlorn
Boundless nightmare should I travel forth
...Mysteries...Hidden Wonders...
Adventurous spirit, no rebuff
"To the edge, here i come"
Dodged rolling stones
Soared through this vast darkness
A sign of life!
Shining spirit glowing merciful light,
A benign presence
'Twas unable to speak
Stayed by herside, kept me warm
After a campanionless travel
Rejoice for a...
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SELF POEM
Published
7th May 2012 9:52am
7th May 2012 9:52am
Underdog (Revised)
A man of law
I aspired to be
Worship me a hero
"I Serve JUSTICE"
But as i grow
I learned, discovered
How despicable the "law" is.
Self interest hypocrisy
I dismissed this false justice
A gray sheep in a black barn
proclaim to be white
Without a goal, I lost my drive
Diminished reason to read and write
Scored a four lack of one
a five might land me with a goody goody bunch
Sent to a class,
Full of wretched vile
Parents tell their kids,
to bully so not to be bullied
and...
I aspired to be
Worship me a hero
"I Serve JUSTICE"
But as i grow
I learned, discovered
How despicable the "law" is.
Self interest hypocrisy
I dismissed this false justice
A gray sheep in a black barn
proclaim to be white
Without a goal, I lost my drive
Diminished reason to read and write
Scored a four lack of one
a five might land me with a goody goody bunch
Sent to a class,
Full of wretched vile
Parents tell their kids,
to bully so not to be bullied
and...
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OBSERVATIONAL POEM
Published
6th May 2012 7:23am
6th May 2012 7:23am
Freedom in modern interpretation
the land of restriction
the lord forbids wisdom
they fill your mind with entertainment
til you can no longer reason
freedom is a delusion
often confused with restriction
and in this invisible prison
very seldom there is boredom
when your mind rid of all corruptions
understand this
that you never had freedom,
only less restrictions
the lord forbids wisdom
they fill your mind with entertainment
til you can no longer reason
freedom is a delusion
often confused with restriction
and in this invisible prison
very seldom there is boredom
when your mind rid of all corruptions
understand this
that you never had freedom,
only less restrictions
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SPIRITUAL POEM
Published
6th May 2012 5:09am
6th May 2012 5:09am
A Meet.
are you there
are you not
i am in despair
cling to hope you exist
for i cannot reason my being
for an eternal oblivion i cannot accept
i call out
close my eyes
open my eyes and you are there
decorated with jewelry and gold
grin spread like the waning crescent moon
"i am but just a veil of your fears,
you never needed me nor ever will."
is he good
or is he bad
i am confused
what appeared, wasn't what i'd thought out to be
i sought, assumed a benignant presence
not a repulsive superficial entity...
are you not
i am in despair
cling to hope you exist
for i cannot reason my being
for an eternal oblivion i cannot accept
i call out
close my eyes
open my eyes and you are there
decorated with jewelry and gold
grin spread like the waning crescent moon
"i am but just a veil of your fears,
you never needed me nor ever will."
is he good
or is he bad
i am confused
what appeared, wasn't what i'd thought out to be
i sought, assumed a benignant presence
not a repulsive superficial entity...
699 reads
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