Submissions by Skill3tfr3ak (PerfectOrphan)
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poet Introduction
Ok so I got into poetry a few years ago during a depression. I have gotten a lot of inspiration from one of my favorite bands, Rise Against. I am open to criticism, and would love advice on how to make my poems better.
Always and Forever
Always and forever until the end
Forever and always I'll be your friend
To guide and protect you fight if i must
I want you to know that this is not lust
I've fallen deeply only for you
I hope that you fell for me too
I'll give you anything your heart may desire
You are my light my living fire.
Forever and always I'll be your friend
To guide and protect you fight if i must
I want you to know that this is not lust
I've fallen deeply only for you
I hope that you fell for me too
I'll give you anything your heart may desire
You are my light my living fire.
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Gone Forever Alive With Me
No longer you're here
The rains come to stay
Why did it happen
On that tragic day
Why did you leave me
Here all alone
How could I not see
The symptoms you've shown
No day now goes by
That I do not think
And when realized not here
My feelings just sink
You're still on my mind
Day in and day out
And there are still days
That I need to shout
WHY DID YOU TAKE HER
WHY IS SHE GONE NOW
Bury my head in my face
And ask myself how
How could I have stopped this
What could I have done
But I realize
Her...
The rains come to stay
Why did it happen
On that tragic day
Why did you leave me
Here all alone
How could I not see
The symptoms you've shown
No day now goes by
That I do not think
And when realized not here
My feelings just sink
You're still on my mind
Day in and day out
And there are still days
That I need to shout
WHY DID YOU TAKE HER
WHY IS SHE GONE NOW
Bury my head in my face
And ask myself how
How could I have stopped this
What could I have done
But I realize
Her...
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One and a Half
It's days that were farthest
That hurt the most
But in days of our closeness
I'll be the host
For the one who has taught me
And shown me the light
That all in this world
Will be alright
I'll be your protector
Your knight in armor
Your rock and shelter
Your good luck charm
The one that you cry to
And secrets spill
The one who wants only
Your heart to fill
I can't be without you
The pain is too much
But when you're close by
Pain you can hush
Because you know me
And every need
I am the one
That...
That hurt the most
But in days of our closeness
I'll be the host
For the one who has taught me
And shown me the light
That all in this world
Will be alright
I'll be your protector
Your knight in armor
Your rock and shelter
Your good luck charm
The one that you cry to
And secrets spill
The one who wants only
Your heart to fill
I can't be without you
The pain is too much
But when you're close by
Pain you can hush
Because you know me
And every need
I am the one
That...
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Waiting
Your arms wrap around me
And whisper in my ear
You say that you love me
But no one is near
I feel your presence
Even define your smell
But apparently I'm
Just under a spell
I think that your close by
And that you lie with me
But it seems I'm mistaken
Oh tragedy
It hurts when I realize
That nothing was real
But the hurt doesn't cover
What it is I feel
But one day I know
That feeling be true
That ill turn over someday
And there will be you
I can't wait for it long
I so want it now
But I guess the...
And whisper in my ear
You say that you love me
But no one is near
I feel your presence
Even define your smell
But apparently I'm
Just under a spell
I think that your close by
And that you lie with me
But it seems I'm mistaken
Oh tragedy
It hurts when I realize
That nothing was real
But the hurt doesn't cover
What it is I feel
But one day I know
That feeling be true
That ill turn over someday
And there will be you
I can't wait for it long
I so want it now
But I guess the...
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The Best Will Come Later
The best will come later
First we endure
The separation between
What we live for
And when the day comes
Of reunite
Never again ill
Leave your sight
You mean too much to me
To let you just go
I promise I'm genuine
There is no false show
You give me all
I've ever asked for
And never have I wanted
To leave through the door
And baby there's so much
To tell you right now
But to be honest
I am unsure of how
So let three words suffice
For all that I do
A kiss on the cheek follows
I love you
First we endure
The separation between
What we live for
And when the day comes
Of reunite
Never again ill
Leave your sight
You mean too much to me
To let you just go
I promise I'm genuine
There is no false show
You give me all
I've ever asked for
And never have I wanted
To leave through the door
And baby there's so much
To tell you right now
But to be honest
I am unsure of how
So let three words suffice
For all that I do
A kiss on the cheek follows
I love you
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Poem of Hurt
Head pound
Blood rush
No one tries
To even hush
My pleading cries
Of hurt and want
But the task of calm
Seems to daunt
Somebody help me
I'm out of control
I need help
'Fore I take a toll
On ones I want
To stay near
Please don't ever
Leave me here
I feel alone
Still in the dark
Show me light
The angels hark
Get me out of here
And hold me close
Tell me that
You love me mos'
I can't leave you
Nor make you stay
But please listen
To what I say
I want to...
Blood rush
No one tries
To even hush
My pleading cries
Of hurt and want
But the task of calm
Seems to daunt
Somebody help me
I'm out of control
I need help
'Fore I take a toll
On ones I want
To stay near
Please don't ever
Leave me here
I feel alone
Still in the dark
Show me light
The angels hark
Get me out of here
And hold me close
Tell me that
You love me mos'
I can't leave you
Nor make you stay
But please listen
To what I say
I want to...
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Just Get Out
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A Prayer For My Love
I hope she's ok
With where she is now
As my ends start to fray
And always ask how
I pray she has strength
To help me get through
This journey of length
That I ask of who
I hold her so dearly
And close to my heart
And we know that clearly
We weren't meant to be part
But as time has come
And done what it has
We discover some
Of all that jazz
Of heartbreak and longing
Faithful and true
Begging and pleading
Just to push through
I pray for her safety
I'll see her again
I can't wait for thee
In my...
With where she is now
As my ends start to fray
And always ask how
I pray she has strength
To help me get through
This journey of length
That I ask of who
I hold her so dearly
And close to my heart
And we know that clearly
We weren't meant to be part
But as time has come
And done what it has
We discover some
Of all that jazz
Of heartbreak and longing
Faithful and true
Begging and pleading
Just to push through
I pray for her safety
I'll see her again
I can't wait for thee
In my...
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A Prayer For My Love
A quick disclaimer: this is not my poem it's my girlfriend's but she doesn't have an account and we want to see responses to it I know DUP says no work that's not your own but I figure as long as she has the full credit it's ok because she doesn't have an account.
if i have him here by my side
id be smiling all the time
but my heart just died
on a stop of a dime
no one knows this pain
not one person here
ever saw the stain
from my last tear
i wish to have you here
i want to have you now
but i guess its clear
that i have to bow...
if i have him here by my side
id be smiling all the time
but my heart just died
on a stop of a dime
no one knows this pain
not one person here
ever saw the stain
from my last tear
i wish to have you here
i want to have you now
but i guess its clear
that i have to bow...
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Emotionful Soul
The inner part
Of the soul they say
Is the one that which
Feelings convey
But how do I reach it
To let them all out
's'it a slow process
Or a quick frightened shout
I can't hold it longer
I'm gonna explode
I just am not able
Can carry this load
Please help rid of me
This burden that's on
My shoulders of darkness
Let me see the dawn
No longer weighed down
By all the pressure
No more endless trying
To be who we were
Separate always
Because of me
But now that it's gone
The truth I can see
...
Of the soul they say
Is the one that which
Feelings convey
But how do I reach it
To let them all out
's'it a slow process
Or a quick frightened shout
I can't hold it longer
I'm gonna explode
I just am not able
Can carry this load
Please help rid of me
This burden that's on
My shoulders of darkness
Let me see the dawn
No longer weighed down
By all the pressure
No more endless trying
To be who we were
Separate always
Because of me
But now that it's gone
The truth I can see
...
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Missing Her
God I miss her
Right by my side
Without her here
I just wanna hide
Or run away
Just leave it behind
Very few would care
And fewer would mind
Just to be with her
Her voice what a sound
I swear when I hear it
A king I've been crowned
The stars in the night
Can't compare to her eyes
Being held in her arms
Is being held on high
I still feel her here
Though she's miles away
I guess I'm in love
Is what I'm trying to say
Number one always
Top of my mind
A way to keep her
Here I must find
...
Right by my side
Without her here
I just wanna hide
Or run away
Just leave it behind
Very few would care
And fewer would mind
Just to be with her
Her voice what a sound
I swear when I hear it
A king I've been crowned
The stars in the night
Can't compare to her eyes
Being held in her arms
Is being held on high
I still feel her here
Though she's miles away
I guess I'm in love
Is what I'm trying to say
Number one always
Top of my mind
A way to keep her
Here I must find
...
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