Submissions by LookWhozWatchin
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Poet Introduction
I don't laugh at my own jokes, my other personality is really funny but we ain't crazy!! (¤_¤)
STORY POEM
Published
12th Jan 2014 11:34pm
12th Jan 2014 11:34pm
Unconditional (Letter To Ricky)
Hi Ricky, I've been meaning to message you,
At first I couldn't guess it's you, Until I flicked through your pictures, realised then it's you,
Hell it's cool if you can't right back,
Yet if you did I'd like that, and I'll reply to you right back,
I was over the moon when you accepted my friends request,
Nobody understands us so we live be the pen we guess,
Oh yes, speaking of pens I'd love to see-you-write before your work goes up on the D-U-site,
Maybe one day I can see-you-right, me-you-high under a clear-blue-sky,
One thing I wanna mention after I read...
At first I couldn't guess it's you, Until I flicked through your pictures, realised then it's you,
Hell it's cool if you can't right back,
Yet if you did I'd like that, and I'll reply to you right back,
I was over the moon when you accepted my friends request,
Nobody understands us so we live be the pen we guess,
Oh yes, speaking of pens I'd love to see-you-write before your work goes up on the D-U-site,
Maybe one day I can see-you-right, me-you-high under a clear-blue-sky,
One thing I wanna mention after I read...
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LOVE POEM
Published
30th Nov 2013 11:17pm
30th Nov 2013 11:17pm
Sunk Ship
Some say we were just young kid, done did dumb things,
They said we didn't really know what love is,
Yet no matter what they said we never let it sunk in,
You use to float my boat, until we sunk ship,
You just up and left, I'm thinking what kinda love's this,
The worst is I keep going back to our first kiss,
Her lips on my lips as the world vanishes,
Imagine this we cuddled and talked about havin' kids,
Now I'm try'na figure how I'ma manage this!
Do you remember babe, November 8th, holding you on the balcony and watching the November rain,
Making a...
They said we didn't really know what love is,
Yet no matter what they said we never let it sunk in,
You use to float my boat, until we sunk ship,
You just up and left, I'm thinking what kinda love's this,
The worst is I keep going back to our first kiss,
Her lips on my lips as the world vanishes,
Imagine this we cuddled and talked about havin' kids,
Now I'm try'na figure how I'ma manage this!
Do you remember babe, November 8th, holding you on the balcony and watching the November rain,
Making a...
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MISCELLANEOUS POEM
Published
30th Nov 2013 11:15pm
30th Nov 2013 11:15pm
Outburst Of Madness
I love films with guts and gore,
A mad man that captures his victims and cuts 'em raw,
Pornos with sluts & whores, big breasts, butts & more,
Down on fours, begging that she wants some more,
I've got some flaws, so write ya list & mind ya business,
Tell me that my mind is twisted,
Like Limp Bizkit it's "Almost Over" so I'm writin' this 'cause my thoughts are spinning like-six-discus,
Five-kids-discuss if I-might-disgust a head teacher if I-might-diss-Gus,
Acting like a dick does,
Playing on my Xbox while my dick rusts,
Scratching...
A mad man that captures his victims and cuts 'em raw,
Pornos with sluts & whores, big breasts, butts & more,
Down on fours, begging that she wants some more,
I've got some flaws, so write ya list & mind ya business,
Tell me that my mind is twisted,
Like Limp Bizkit it's "Almost Over" so I'm writin' this 'cause my thoughts are spinning like-six-discus,
Five-kids-discuss if I-might-disgust a head teacher if I-might-diss-Gus,
Acting like a dick does,
Playing on my Xbox while my dick rusts,
Scratching...
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MISCELLANEOUS POEM
Published
25th Jul 2013 2:43pm
25th Jul 2013 2:43pm
Horror Flick
I don't care what the world says and what they may consider us,
It's not you, it's me, I'm somethin' similar to Insidious,
A Freddy Vs Jason-dream,
I'm runnin' but I feel like I'm goin' nowhere yet The Omen's chasin'-me,
I can hear Satan-scream,
Please make-him-leave,
"Baby I'm scared, maybe we should take you to The Exorcist maybe-they-can-help and make ya well",
Baby-save-ya-self, these demons are gonna Drag Me To Hell,
Fall asleep on Halloween and wake up to a Nightmare In Elm Street yet I don't wanna say I'm mad-at-mind,
I'm in love...
It's not you, it's me, I'm somethin' similar to Insidious,
A Freddy Vs Jason-dream,
I'm runnin' but I feel like I'm goin' nowhere yet The Omen's chasin'-me,
I can hear Satan-scream,
Please make-him-leave,
"Baby I'm scared, maybe we should take you to The Exorcist maybe-they-can-help and make ya well",
Baby-save-ya-self, these demons are gonna Drag Me To Hell,
Fall asleep on Halloween and wake up to a Nightmare In Elm Street yet I don't wanna say I'm mad-at-mind,
I'm in love...
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OBSERVATIONAL POEM
Published
13th Jul 2013 3:02pm
13th Jul 2013 3:02pm
M.I.A (Missing in Action)
Ain't it funny how things change,
Kings ate meals while kids slaved, shift weights in a big cave,
Rest for 24 hours and work 6 days,
When the night came the kids blazed as they writ names on the walls with 2 inch blades 'cause they lived caged and at this stage there isn't reason why everybody's enraged,
Pretend we've never been phased, yet we all seem crazed to crave for a war with the thought we're doing the right things,
Yet taking a life brings a darker side out as your mind sinks and you might sink along with the wide ship that you ride through the wind, ...
Kings ate meals while kids slaved, shift weights in a big cave,
Rest for 24 hours and work 6 days,
When the night came the kids blazed as they writ names on the walls with 2 inch blades 'cause they lived caged and at this stage there isn't reason why everybody's enraged,
Pretend we've never been phased, yet we all seem crazed to crave for a war with the thought we're doing the right things,
Yet taking a life brings a darker side out as your mind sinks and you might sink along with the wide ship that you ride through the wind, ...
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MISCELLANEOUS POEM
Published
13th Jul 2013 2:39pm
13th Jul 2013 2:39pm
Reemiss
If you open up my rhyme book you can hear my page screamin', Like a caged demon,
Stay schemin' but I ain't Kenan,
I ain't sleepin', that's why they can't get close enough to jump me 'cause ain't Keegan,
I hate the fact we've still got fakes breathin',
Put these haters in plate, the same shit you place beef in,
People make reasons, for why they play feelin's,
"'Cause when a heart breaks, no it don't break even",
It's been so cold for the last two years I feel like we've had winter for 8 seasons,
No Christmas yet I see the clouds as black and...
Stay schemin' but I ain't Kenan,
I ain't sleepin', that's why they can't get close enough to jump me 'cause ain't Keegan,
I hate the fact we've still got fakes breathin',
Put these haters in plate, the same shit you place beef in,
People make reasons, for why they play feelin's,
"'Cause when a heart breaks, no it don't break even",
It's been so cold for the last two years I feel like we've had winter for 8 seasons,
No Christmas yet I see the clouds as black and...
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LOVE POEM
Published
1st Jul 2013 6:21pm
1st Jul 2013 6:21pm
Would You?
Would you bring my heart at ease like the summer breeze?
Would you still be here when others leave?
Would you let me fall back on you when everybody falls back on me?
Would you be able to stay strong when I collapse, I'm down and weak?
Would you cherish every moment and hold me when I'm sound asleep?
If I disappear would you wait?, count the days, count the weeks,
Would you keep searchin' when everyone gives up or let us become distanced with time?
Would you kiss me "It'll be fine" when I seem distanced in mind?
Would you respect my diary if I...
Would you still be here when others leave?
Would you let me fall back on you when everybody falls back on me?
Would you be able to stay strong when I collapse, I'm down and weak?
Would you cherish every moment and hold me when I'm sound asleep?
If I disappear would you wait?, count the days, count the weeks,
Would you keep searchin' when everyone gives up or let us become distanced with time?
Would you kiss me "It'll be fine" when I seem distanced in mind?
Would you respect my diary if I...
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LOVE POEM
Published
30th Jun 2013 2:39pm
30th Jun 2013 2:39pm
She's like a drug
She's amazin', it's crazy I'm cravin' her touch,
She gives me this feelin', something same as a rush,
It's something beautiful that only stays here with us,
She's like an addiction, when her lips are upon mine it's like a great the intake of a drug,
All through my veins, my brain's lost in a new world of a girl that leaves me thinkin' "Is this for real?",
Still convincing myself "This is how we both feel",
At times my mind says I need to up my dosage without overdosing,
When it all sinks in it's still incredible,
Try'na stay...
She gives me this feelin', something same as a rush,
It's something beautiful that only stays here with us,
She's like an addiction, when her lips are upon mine it's like a great the intake of a drug,
All through my veins, my brain's lost in a new world of a girl that leaves me thinkin' "Is this for real?",
Still convincing myself "This is how we both feel",
At times my mind says I need to up my dosage without overdosing,
When it all sinks in it's still incredible,
Try'na stay...
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OBSERVATIONAL POEM
Published
30th Jun 2013 2:08pm
30th Jun 2013 2:08pm
illuminati (-_-)
They say that I'm paranoid, they talk about me like I'm crazy,
Maybe they're hidin' the truth, I'm writin' this to ensure someone reads incase they take me too,
I'm constanly asking myself "Look Who's Watchin'?" but it's okay, I'm safe in this room,
Every man gotta die, but some how they'll blame it on you,
The question is, is it a bunch of pricks-in-suits in a business-room, or is there really a "Secret Society"?,
Who's "Big Brother" and why does he keep a close eye on me?,
I close my eye an see all these sym-bols bouncin' around my...
Maybe they're hidin' the truth, I'm writin' this to ensure someone reads incase they take me too,
I'm constanly asking myself "Look Who's Watchin'?" but it's okay, I'm safe in this room,
Every man gotta die, but some how they'll blame it on you,
The question is, is it a bunch of pricks-in-suits in a business-room, or is there really a "Secret Society"?,
Who's "Big Brother" and why does he keep a close eye on me?,
I close my eye an see all these sym-bols bouncin' around my...
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STORY POEM
Published
27th Jun 2013 6:23pm
27th Jun 2013 6:23pm
Little Suzzie: Dear Mama
She Wakes Up To Hear Her Mum And Dad Shoutin' Back And Forth,
"LIZZIE DON'T TOUCH ME, YOU AIN'T NOTHIN' BUT A FUCKIN' WHORE",
She Hears A Big Thud, Then Her Father Walkin' Out, Slam The Door,
Runnin' Downstairs To Find Her Mother Curled Up Cryin' On The Floor,
She Holds Her And Says "Why'd You Let Him Treat Like-That!,
Mama Please Stand Up, Mama Please Fight-Back,
Mama I'm Here For You If He Dares To Strike-Back,
Don't Leave This To Another Day, Tell Me What Would Nana Say?",
She Says "Suzzie Stay Outta This, Go-Up-Love,
Baby You...
"LIZZIE DON'T TOUCH ME, YOU AIN'T NOTHIN' BUT A FUCKIN' WHORE",
She Hears A Big Thud, Then Her Father Walkin' Out, Slam The Door,
Runnin' Downstairs To Find Her Mother Curled Up Cryin' On The Floor,
She Holds Her And Says "Why'd You Let Him Treat Like-That!,
Mama Please Stand Up, Mama Please Fight-Back,
Mama I'm Here For You If He Dares To Strike-Back,
Don't Leave This To Another Day, Tell Me What Would Nana Say?",
She Says "Suzzie Stay Outta This, Go-Up-Love,
Baby You...
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