Submissions by Forsaken
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poet Introduction
Hi my name is Jose and I've been writting for awhile. You see poetry is my only way I express and let things out. If you read my stuff just be honest, they are really important to me because they are my deepest feelings.
LOVE POEM
Published
4th Nov 2013 5:03pm
4th Nov 2013 5:03pm
My last mistake
When you found me I was in darkness and the first light I saw was your eyes,
The miracle I was waiting for finally had arrived,
You opened up my eyes and showed the meaning of true love,
You gave me hope once more, of feelings I had lost,
Our souls you entwined together; I opened up my heart to you,
We were the perfect eclipse; you were the sun and I was the moon,
Everything was perfect that there was always sunshine even in the rain,
Even throughout all the chaos of the world, I was sane,
I thought you were my oasis but in the end you were the desert instead,...
The miracle I was waiting for finally had arrived,
You opened up my eyes and showed the meaning of true love,
You gave me hope once more, of feelings I had lost,
Our souls you entwined together; I opened up my heart to you,
We were the perfect eclipse; you were the sun and I was the moon,
Everything was perfect that there was always sunshine even in the rain,
Even throughout all the chaos of the world, I was sane,
I thought you were my oasis but in the end you were the desert instead,...
852 reads
2 Comments
LOVE POEM
Published
29th May 2013 6:02pm
29th May 2013 6:02pm
Waiting for, only you
Your identity is unknown but for your love I burn,
My heart beats for you, my soul for you yearns,
Even though I don’t know you or who you are,
Every night I stare at the sky and try to see your reflection in a star,
I could feel your shadow lurking around,
So I keep alert just starring at the ground,
Every where I go I keep my eyes open wide,
I’m afraid to blink incase you pass bye,
I can’t wait for the day when our gothic souls entwine into one,
I can’t wait to get back the days that were lost and gone,
But everyone tells me that you’re a false hope;...
My heart beats for you, my soul for you yearns,
Even though I don’t know you or who you are,
Every night I stare at the sky and try to see your reflection in a star,
I could feel your shadow lurking around,
So I keep alert just starring at the ground,
Every where I go I keep my eyes open wide,
I’m afraid to blink incase you pass bye,
I can’t wait for the day when our gothic souls entwine into one,
I can’t wait to get back the days that were lost and gone,
But everyone tells me that you’re a false hope;...
902 reads
6 Comments
DARK POEM
Published
1st May 2013 5:10pm
1st May 2013 5:10pm
House of pain
The days are endless and the nights are silent as no one hears me cry,
The tears I shed that roll down my face is actually blood from my crimson eyes,
Broken in the dark is how my soul is every night,
Slowly disappearing, fading out of sight,
My distance’s boundless, I need to vanish with out a trace,
Leave this sinister house that’s drowning me in nothing but pain,
The wind is vicious, it’s really hard to breath,
The tides are grueling, that I’m getting sucked in deep,
The reflection in the mirror changes every day,
A monster is all I see what’s...
The tears I shed that roll down my face is actually blood from my crimson eyes,
Broken in the dark is how my soul is every night,
Slowly disappearing, fading out of sight,
My distance’s boundless, I need to vanish with out a trace,
Leave this sinister house that’s drowning me in nothing but pain,
The wind is vicious, it’s really hard to breath,
The tides are grueling, that I’m getting sucked in deep,
The reflection in the mirror changes every day,
A monster is all I see what’s...
857 reads
14 Comments
DARK POEM
Published
11th Apr 2013 11:53pm
11th Apr 2013 11:53pm
Just one wish
The anguish that haunts me It can’t seem to fade,
I try to run but it won’t go away,
It dwells in my mind; it won’t let me sleep,
Afraid to close my eyes because it ruins my dreams,
I’m drained out, it’s getting harder to breathe,
It’s taking my strength, it’s making me weak,
The nights are silent that I can hear my soul cry,
The days are dim the sun doesn’t shine,
I can’t stare at no one, I can’t even see,
By the black tear I’ve shed and what’s becoming of me,
Alone and Forsaken is what my life has been,
By choice and by fate even from within,...
I try to run but it won’t go away,
It dwells in my mind; it won’t let me sleep,
Afraid to close my eyes because it ruins my dreams,
I’m drained out, it’s getting harder to breathe,
It’s taking my strength, it’s making me weak,
The nights are silent that I can hear my soul cry,
The days are dim the sun doesn’t shine,
I can’t stare at no one, I can’t even see,
By the black tear I’ve shed and what’s becoming of me,
Alone and Forsaken is what my life has been,
By choice and by fate even from within,...
685 reads
4 Comments
DARK POEM
Published
2nd Apr 2013 6:03pm
2nd Apr 2013 6:03pm
Cry no more
Alone I walk as black tears roll down my face,
Searching for my freedom trying to escape,
Surrounded in desolation I cannot break free
As I break down, the tragic part is no one perceives,
The days go bye so fast, that everything you had is left in the past,
The end is near, wondering will it be your last,
Dead leaves in my door steps, hollow is my heart,
My soul is fading away, drifting in the dark,
I’m bleeding in the inside, it’s getting really hard to breath,
Drowning in my own pool of blood no one could save me,
Up in my horizon, Death Valley in...
Searching for my freedom trying to escape,
Surrounded in desolation I cannot break free
As I break down, the tragic part is no one perceives,
The days go bye so fast, that everything you had is left in the past,
The end is near, wondering will it be your last,
Dead leaves in my door steps, hollow is my heart,
My soul is fading away, drifting in the dark,
I’m bleeding in the inside, it’s getting really hard to breath,
Drowning in my own pool of blood no one could save me,
Up in my horizon, Death Valley in...
735 reads
8 Comments
LOVE POEM
Published
2nd Apr 2013 5:38pm
2nd Apr 2013 5:38pm
Live within a lie
I know the years have passed since you been gone,
But I still think of you, it still hard for me to move on,
I’m still waiting for you; I still hope you’ll return,
Day and night you’re on my mind, for you I still yearn,
I miss you so much; you have no idea how much I do,
I can’t adapt myself with out your love or you,
I could still hear your voice and I could still see your face,
I could still taste your lips; I could still feel your caress,
Somehow or someway you always cross my mind,
Whether I‘m dreaming or awake I could still see you by my side,
I...
But I still think of you, it still hard for me to move on,
I’m still waiting for you; I still hope you’ll return,
Day and night you’re on my mind, for you I still yearn,
I miss you so much; you have no idea how much I do,
I can’t adapt myself with out your love or you,
I could still hear your voice and I could still see your face,
I could still taste your lips; I could still feel your caress,
Somehow or someway you always cross my mind,
Whether I‘m dreaming or awake I could still see you by my side,
I...
694 reads
4 Comments
LOVE POEM
Published
1st Apr 2013 7:14pm
1st Apr 2013 7:14pm
Pain
I live with a question mark in my mind, in my heart and in my soul,
Asking myself many times what went wrong,
A letter or a phone call was the least you could have done,
But you did none of them, you just left me alone,
The pain of it all is that before I could say goodbye and hold you one last time,
You faded away before the first dawn of light,
Hour’s passes bye, impatiently I get because of you not being here,
Each day that passes bye, it’s slowly is killing me away, feeling that end is near,
I waited for you many years, I lived through so many...
Asking myself many times what went wrong,
A letter or a phone call was the least you could have done,
But you did none of them, you just left me alone,
The pain of it all is that before I could say goodbye and hold you one last time,
You faded away before the first dawn of light,
Hour’s passes bye, impatiently I get because of you not being here,
Each day that passes bye, it’s slowly is killing me away, feeling that end is near,
I waited for you many years, I lived through so many...
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0 Comments
LOVE POEM
Published
1st Apr 2013 6:52pm
1st Apr 2013 6:52pm
Prisoner
Forsaken by you as I continue with my arms open wide,
Entwined to your ghost I’ll live till the end of time,
As I find myself hiding within the shadow of my lonely tree at night,
Nourishing it with the black tears that I cry,
Every street I walk on is dark because you use to be my light,
The harsh cries I hear at night is actually my soul trapped in the cobwebs and darkness inside,
I never imagine how lost I would be by us being apart,
I never imagine how much your lost love will hurt and break my heart,
Even though you broke my heart into many pieces and...
Entwined to your ghost I’ll live till the end of time,
As I find myself hiding within the shadow of my lonely tree at night,
Nourishing it with the black tears that I cry,
Every street I walk on is dark because you use to be my light,
The harsh cries I hear at night is actually my soul trapped in the cobwebs and darkness inside,
I never imagine how lost I would be by us being apart,
I never imagine how much your lost love will hurt and break my heart,
Even though you broke my heart into many pieces and...
571 reads
2 Comments
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