Expel Specious Dialogue
Of night's opinion I confess
a hermit of sin sweetening my cavity
under duress of my swollen prowess
Masturbating to it's fullest
in the corset of night
between her thin pin alley
Reaching the bottoms of my dwell
in this quarry of lye and stones
as the frogs coddle my cussing lust
Echoes whispering a cold December
a hermit of sin sweetening my cavity
of shaggy bones
a hermit of sin sweetening my cavity
under duress of my swollen prowess
Masturbating to it's fullest
in the corset of night
between her thin pin alley
Reaching the bottoms of my dwell
in this quarry of lye and stones
as the frogs coddle my cussing lust
Echoes whispering a cold December
a hermit of sin sweetening my cavity
of shaggy bones
Ingredients said:You constantly ignore the fact that I asked if they wanted me to and they said they had agreed to hear them.
I refuse to retract my truthful statements, I am following ideals handed down by you personally and will be voicing my opinions about them until you retract your even more previous statement where you inferred I was harassing one of our posters.
Despite pointing out fallacies in your argument you ignored me. I fail to see how you consider that to be very familial.
There is the offending post.
https://gyazo.com/559e6977eb3cd5c7e9178932813adcda
Damn auto correct need to proofread Editing the ridiculousness
Your arguments and excuses don't fly with me.
You said " they" asked you to critique, that is untrue.
It was Missy who said go ahead not everyone.
Because you questioned her use of metaphor.
On a thread where we express ourselves freely,
someone judging or picking apart our work is setting them up for defense.
I understand you are from several other sites so let me tell you how it is done here.
When we post we are given the option of having honest critique, friendly comments or no comments.
We don't offer up critique unless you are in a group setting and we share in honest critique.
I think you probably know all this though right?
You are attempting incognito on a return visit.
Don't retract your offensive statement that's fine it just shows your character
Where did I accuse you of harrassing another poet
Prove yourself if I did as you said I must have had a reason and will own it.
Where did I lay down ideals for you to follow?
And why if I did would you choose to follow them specifically and rebel against everything else?
Because that's what you do. you choose, when it suits you, when you are able to twist it, to make it appear as something that it is not.
Your goal is to distract and confuse to masquerade behind a situation to gain attention
You enjoy putting others down to boost yourself up
I refuse to retract my truthful statements, I am following ideals handed down by you personally and will be voicing my opinions about them until you retract your even more previous statement where you inferred I was harassing one of our posters.
Despite pointing out fallacies in your argument you ignored me. I fail to see how you consider that to be very familial.
There is the offending post.
https://gyazo.com/559e6977eb3cd5c7e9178932813adcda
Damn auto correct need to proofread Editing the ridiculousness
Your arguments and excuses don't fly with me.
You said " they" asked you to critique, that is untrue.
It was Missy who said go ahead not everyone.
Because you questioned her use of metaphor.
On a thread where we express ourselves freely,
someone judging or picking apart our work is setting them up for defense.
I understand you are from several other sites so let me tell you how it is done here.
When we post we are given the option of having honest critique, friendly comments or no comments.
We don't offer up critique unless you are in a group setting and we share in honest critique.
I think you probably know all this though right?
You are attempting incognito on a return visit.
Don't retract your offensive statement that's fine it just shows your character
Where did I accuse you of harrassing another poet
Prove yourself if I did as you said I must have had a reason and will own it.
Where did I lay down ideals for you to follow?
And why if I did would you choose to follow them specifically and rebel against everything else?
Because that's what you do. you choose, when it suits you, when you are able to twist it, to make it appear as something that it is not.
Your goal is to distract and confuse to masquerade behind a situation to gain attention
You enjoy putting others down to boost yourself up
Anonymous
Four pages while I’ve been at work? Good lawd.
Valeriyabeyond said:
It’s obvious to me Missy is secure in herself and in her work by the way she accepted your critique as gracefully as she did
Is an example of a true professional.
Thank you. Possibly the nicest thing anybody has ever said about me on this forum... imma take it
Umm said:This was supposed to be dark-ish. Perhaps one of my all time faves 🖤
Umm, I bloody loved this piece when you originally posted it. I remember reading it and being blown away. I think the italics add so much weight to your piece here adding that bit of emphasis. It’s soooo heavy in so few words. Bit of a master stroke, really.
Valeriyabeyond said:
It’s obvious to me Missy is secure in herself and in her work by the way she accepted your critique as gracefully as she did
Is an example of a true professional.
Thank you. Possibly the nicest thing anybody has ever said about me on this forum... imma take it
Umm said:This was supposed to be dark-ish. Perhaps one of my all time faves 🖤
Umm, I bloody loved this piece when you originally posted it. I remember reading it and being blown away. I think the italics add so much weight to your piece here adding that bit of emphasis. It’s soooo heavy in so few words. Bit of a master stroke, really.
The Shutters Creak In The Wind
The future, begins to creak
I don't want to die without you
There is so much to say
I've said too much
I had thoughts of singing
Freefall,
the floor boards creak on
that side if you have stones
in your pockets
I had thoughts of being free
Tidepools wrap the rope twice
around willows branch
the rope won't creak
while swinging
I had thoughts of flying
Wind swept leaves piled high
behind the screen door
neighbors dog barks on point
as the shutters creak in the wind
I had thoughts of dying
I don't want to die without you
There is so much to say
I've said too much
I had thoughts of singing
Freefall,
the floor boards creak on
that side if you have stones
in your pockets
I had thoughts of being free
Tidepools wrap the rope twice
around willows branch
the rope won't creak
while swinging
I had thoughts of flying
Wind swept leaves piled high
behind the screen door
neighbors dog barks on point
as the shutters creak in the wind
I had thoughts of dying
Written by Valeriyabeyond
(Dhyana)
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I wanted to touch on something that BlackWolf said earlier and would like some feedback
Just for the hell of it
Its something I already am aware of but let's do it anyway
BlackWolf said " Love is not dark"
In some of my earlier pieces which i have recycled here i have a very dark perception of love
I run from it I chastise it
I call it filthy names.
What I am speaking, or writing rather is not love at all
What would you call it
Just for the hell of it
Its something I already am aware of but let's do it anyway
BlackWolf said " Love is not dark"
In some of my earlier pieces which i have recycled here i have a very dark perception of love
I run from it I chastise it
I call it filthy names.
What I am speaking, or writing rather is not love at all
What would you call it
The Shutters Creak In The Wind
The future, begins to creak
I don't want to die without you
There is so much to say
I've said too much
I had thoughts of singing
Freefall,
the floor boards creak on
that side if you have stones
in your pockets
I had thoughts of being free
Tidepools wrap the rope twice
around willows branch
the rope won't creak
while swinging
I had thoughts of flying
Wind swept leaves piled high
behind the screen door
neighbors dog barks on point
as the shutters creak in the wind
I had thoughts of dying
I don't want to die without you
There is so much to say
I've said too much
I had thoughts of singing
Freefall,
the floor boards creak on
that side if you have stones
in your pockets
I had thoughts of being free
Tidepools wrap the rope twice
around willows branch
the rope won't creak
while swinging
I had thoughts of flying
Wind swept leaves piled high
behind the screen door
neighbors dog barks on point
as the shutters creak in the wind
I had thoughts of dying
Written by Valeriyabeyond
(Dhyana)
Go To Page
Valeriyabeyond said:I wanted to touch on something that BlackWolf said earlier and would like some feedback
Just for the hell of it
Its something I already am aware of but let's do it anyway
BlackWolf said " Love is not dark"
In some of my earlier pieces which i have recycled here i have a very dark perception of love
I run from it I chastise it
I call it filthy names.
What I am speaking, or writing rather is not love at all
What would you call it
.
Reading this I felt no fear or darkness directed at the person you love. You didn’t want to die without him, you feared the future, not him. So what I read was definitely dark, but at the same time love was there. You can have the both together. It is when the dread is directed towards the person you are connected to that it isn’t love, that it moves into the realm of lust or fear.
Just for the hell of it
Its something I already am aware of but let's do it anyway
BlackWolf said " Love is not dark"
In some of my earlier pieces which i have recycled here i have a very dark perception of love
I run from it I chastise it
I call it filthy names.
What I am speaking, or writing rather is not love at all
What would you call it
.
Reading this I felt no fear or darkness directed at the person you love. You didn’t want to die without him, you feared the future, not him. So what I read was definitely dark, but at the same time love was there. You can have the both together. It is when the dread is directed towards the person you are connected to that it isn’t love, that it moves into the realm of lust or fear.
Sunwolfe1745 said:.
Reading this I felt no fear or darkness directed at the person you love. You didn’t want to die without him, you feared the future, not him. So what I read was definitely dark, but at the same time love was there. You can have the both together. It is when the dread is directed towards the person you are connected to that it isn’t love, that it moves into the realm of lust or fear.
Excellent reply that's what I was wanting to hear
Some of my work is very hard to reach .
Thank you so much for commenting
Reading this I felt no fear or darkness directed at the person you love. You didn’t want to die without him, you feared the future, not him. So what I read was definitely dark, but at the same time love was there. You can have the both together. It is when the dread is directed towards the person you are connected to that it isn’t love, that it moves into the realm of lust or fear.
Excellent reply that's what I was wanting to hear
Some of my work is very hard to reach .
Thank you so much for commenting
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