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Poetry competition CLOSED 21st November 2017 11:41pm
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Total Avengement

SourMelon0313
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Fire of Insight
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Poetry Contest

A poem about sweet revenge- brutally wronged, then brutally avenged...
A person can be wronged in many ways:
-broken hearts
-cons
-innocent people taking blame for a crime
etc...

What is a best way to payback someone of their mal-intent or anyone that oppose you?


feel free to be creative(gory, dreamy, brutal..)
A villain can come back at a hero of their total downfall! (n' vise versa)

Show the most glorious uprising with a punch!

SourMelon0313
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OH, and it doesn't have to a human or that's being avenged or you're avenging for... any living or non-living thing

SourMelon0313
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In This Morbid Dream I Call Vengeance

Sometimes...I dream  
of mutilation so absolute  
Sometimes...I wish  
of humiliation so brute  
 
Tempted to kill  
desperate to fill  
dreaming & wishing such revenge from hell  
 
See these hands of mine?  
See this heart of mine?  
It yearns and burns for bloody crime;  
 
Taking the knife,  
 slicing tips of your prided cock  
stripping that slut,  
feeding her your shit  
 
 
Ever so politely  
ever so slightly  
you'd suffer in vain...  
 
 
or not  
 
 
May your life end tragically-  
with brutal slaughter so prime;  
cutting fingers off, one by one  
taking my sweet little time  
 
 
See this knife?  
See this saw?  
It calls my name...  
 
Murder,  
shall I..?  
 
 
Only when I please!  
 
 
Watching you laugh  
watching you smile..  
makes me gag it clogs up my throat  
I'll puke right into your dickhole  
 
 
Slowly shall it be, surely it'll be done  
 
 
In this morbid dream I call vengeance  
 
 
Written by SourMelon0313 (H)
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SonofHowarth
Lost Thinker
United Kingdom
Joined 29th Oct 2011
Forum Posts: 17

Death Of A Boy, Birth Of A Reaper

The ultimate retribution has risen from mother earth’s hymen that was so savagely broken.
Revenge will be reaped, they will die for everyone reaps what they sow, and what they have sown they shall get back ten fold.
By their dual edged tongues they lived.
Live by the sword and so shall you die.
He will carve a reckoning through the guilty and repentance shall not provide absolution from sin.
Engulfed in darkness his souls guiding light, stripped and rebuilt for the fight, where once was he weak now he is strong, he sets out to scour the land and right the wrong.

The reaper brings his dark charges into line they walk the soil that granted him birth. Under the backdrop of black, a frost bitten night illuminated only by silver moonlight a colossus shape shifts orbited by many black ellipse.
Emerging from the woods they spread north to begin the campaign.

“They will know my name, and so will it be inscribed on histories consciousness a scar on the landscape as telling as a crater.
They caused my death and as people begin to lose their lives the utterance on their breath will be my name, as they learn of my rebirth; an annihilation begins”

Moving quickly and in blood curdling fashion the attack begins.
Dark hands grasp in ghostly silence, the translucence betrays the strength, flesh is ripped from a small but growing preliminary rent, with blood splatter and jets hitting the floor they were once alive but now are no more.

With the continued assault came no revolt and with every life shed the darkness was fed, the dead assimilated to work for the one they murdered, their spirits blackened and transmogrified hideous in sight as they were in essence before.
This event will be the new lore of exclusion and respect and no more should this swarm be needed.

A black blanket envelops all; seeing the eradication complete the reaper stands in silence and berates a society that made this necessary, and far from being cold, this once boy now reaper knows only too well the price of hate, and so now do the recipients of this act, and with every empty home and ghostly darkened road, all this was avoidable.
Far from desolation there should be life and the reaper hopes that when people learn of this plague they learn this lesson.

Written by SonofHowarth
© 2010 SonofHowarth All Rights Reserved
(From the collection "Midnight on Moonlight)
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SourMelon0313
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Thank you so much SonofHowarth..!
For kicking us off with a very intense piece..!
Very strong, I love it..!

Erotic_Goddess
Fire of Insight
United States 9awards
Joined 1st Mar 2016
Forum Posts: 87

Let The Chill Trip Him

The vulnerable heart listens as he speaks in slurs left behind in haste, tip of a glass, whiskey laced.

Empowerment in his drunkard, staggering left to right, swaying this way and that, I stand stuck to this place, feet firmly planted, poise in my stance and pity in a glance.

Twinkle Twinkle fuck me fifty, had a drink last night, found I liked whiskey.
Whiskey costs a mouth full and my words mean nothing, say but for the sorrowful awaiting a bar stool, as I fall from mine to crawl across filthy cold in search of souls to quench my thirst in empty bottles on the fucking floor.

Rock a bye I stammer to my shadows in faned power, shake of the fist, kissed the cheek of the door geek. Send rose to his cheeks, sickly feeling to my gut clenching and belly aching to unlistening ears.

A man with least contact weak to the calculated hand playing ring a round a Rosie with his emotions.
Had a notion... an epiphany, that men were toasting to the fall of clothes from the woman's spirit, curse her...she only does what you say, what you do. And that makes her less then the gum spit from her mouth and stuck to your shoe as you step over the trash you
take out....
To dinner, drinks....sheets filthy and stained with the bitter after taste that he would say...be anything to feed on her longings....

Had a thought...crossed my heart that angels aren't meant to fall to their knees before those unequal and undeserving but only stand over them, shielding them from the evils that walk in dark alleys....

Only to lead them too the pain they inflict on the unsuspecting ignorant, lest they be idiots....whores...cloaked in the same dressings they ripped from untouched and unbitten skins.

Let them wear the words of the lashed and the victimized, let them be freed from chains of hypocrisy and stand to hold firmly side to side with the sufferings they kissed in thorns upon the head of the brittle heart.

Can they wear the scars as gracefully as we or are men as weak as their ignorant curses and as strong as a few moments in undignified motions pressing a shaky form to bed with his demons never to know innocence in a glance again?
Down on bended knee I sway....

Make the beggars, the takers face the reflection of what they steal, let them see in the mirror the coldness in a touch, force them watch what they wish to hold walk to death on weary feet that couldn't bare the suffering of walking on broken glass you scatter amid the trails of bleeding souls behind.
Let them hold their own heart in their hand powerlessly watching the chill of reality draining its beating...let them seek the same end that was written by the calculated hand that stole all of what was had...
left only sorrow on the nightstand....

Tears to dry in awakened eyes...

Her heart held in her grasp as it takes its leave of absence in a staggered beating step...

Buckle your shoe love...
The fall will smear your makeup...
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Sumdumchik
Twisted Dreamer
Joined 13th Sep 2017
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No one stole

eswaller
Dangerous Mind
United States 31awards
Joined 22nd Dec 2015
Forum Posts: 762

Seeing You In Hell

We were not ready to take the next step
Because we were too afraid looking over
Our shoulders. Darling, your bad rep
Was becoming unlucky like a clover
And was following right behind us
Constantly. There was all this tension
Permeating the air. I was too tired to fuss
And fight over girls who had your attention
More than I did. Other people mattered
More to you and I hated everything blue.
I would rather have everything shattered
All over the floor rather than trying to
Fix the unfixable. You never knew or
Cared to know that it took me a while
To get over all of it. The internal war
Was pointless. I had to fake smile
And pretend like it did not hurt
At all. I remember all of those
Times you pushed me into the dirt
Without ever caring about if I rose
Back up or not. You were never
Concerned about my heart or well
Being. Darling, the pull of the lever
Was all on you. Your charm and spell
On me has worn off. See you in hell.
Written by eswaller
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SourMelon0313
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Erotic_Goddess, eswaller


Thank you so much for your wonderful participation..!

David_Macleod
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Tyrant of Words
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This Is The Day

You don’t look so scary anymore
Lying there on my autopsy table
And I know what you’re thinking
You’re thinking ‘why. Why me?’
Why not search your memory
It’s surely in there somewhere
Your wondering why I broke all
Your fingers with a clamp and pliers
Simple, try gripping something now
You’ll also wondering why I took all
Of your toes of individually using
My favourite electric carving knife
Try kicking the bedroom door now
You’re wondering why I gouged
Out your eyeballs with a soup spoon
Try giving me those come to bed
And suck my dick look, you know!
You’ll be wondering why I welded
Your mouth shut with a blow torch
Try all those vile insults and requests
Try drinking a bottle of whiskey now
You might b bemused why I cut off
Your balls with gardening shears
Try splooshing that milk down
Anyone else’s widened throat
You’ll wonder why I don’t kill you
Quick: Simply you have to be made
Too suffer, you’ve only been here
Two weeks and you will die by tomorrow
Fifteen days verses fifteen years
You should be thanking me for
Letting you off and down easily
Your certainly wondering why
I am holding your cock in one
Hand and a scalpel in the other
Bring back any memories of
Having me grip your cock and
Jerk it or suck it for you, sometimes
You had a knife for motivation
You would grip me
Now you can’t
You would kick me
Now you can’t
You’d glare at me
Now you can’t
You would scream at me
Now you can’t
You liked everything quick
Now I don’t
So what to do about your
Snake bit penis: Remember; get
The poison out like in the cowboy movies
Sometimes I talk too much, bad habit
I don’t want to tell you who I am
I want you to fucking remember
I know this next thing will jog your memory
You’ll be wondering why I am cutting of
Your dick with a hacksaw, why I am turning
You over face down; remember yet?
You can’t see this but I have placed your
Penis in a broken glass milk bottle, jagged
I think you might remember this
But you were the giver not the taker
I reamed the bottle up his as time and time
Again, there was so much blood as
His body convulsed and constricted
It’s funny how you can still scream
Under welded lips: Fantastic, worthwhile
You still don’t fucking remember, do you?
This card and your favourite chocolates
Let me read it to you, because you can’t
Dad, Happy fathers day you evil old bastard
May you be tortured in hell – R.I.P





SourMelon0313
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Sir...
David_Macleod Sir...


I am honored by your entrance..!
Thank you..!

DaThrill2
Strange Creature
United States
Joined 15th Nov 2017
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Webs of Darkness
I would have laid down my life, just so you could take one more breath
But my love wasn't enough, you treated me like death
You want to see me get strangled, all bloody and mangled
Barbed wire wrapped tightly around me I’m tangled
I took down my wall I had mortared around me
I trusted you, but your wickedness  found me
I don’t care anymore, I’m about to snap
I took the bait and fell right into your trap
I’m taking a whole gang of motherfuckers out with me
No longer a heart inside, I’m stranded on empty
Just a shell with no soul, losing all control
Love is evicted, only hate can grow
Your web of lies, you used to belittle me
Why the fuck does everyone seek to hurt me?
Do I have a fucking target in the center of my chest?
Out of the masses, you hurt me the best
I was already wounded from all the shot I've had to take
You pieced my heart back together so u could watch it break
I am not aiming for you, I want you to suffer
Hope you get a disease, and can never recover
You get put on life support; I’ll kill everyone but you
You’ll have to live forever with the pain you put me through!!
Fuck the world, I’m coming full throttle.
I’m off my meds and no refills on the bottle

SourMelon0313
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DaThrill2..!

Thankyou so much for your entrance..!
:)

DaThrill2
Strange Creature
United States
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so i did it right lol. now i gotta fix it :p

J_J_Jay_Jr
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I'll tell you

   
I'll tell you what you were.    
   
You were a notch on my bed post,    
locker room bragging rights.    
   
You were a cunt to receive my dick,    
a receiver of my wet dream's emissions.    
   
You were a blonde to follow the redhead,    
not as good as the brunet.    
   
You were way too short, barely up to my chin,    
not fun size at all.    
   
Your boobs were so small, most boys have more,    
couldn't fill a training bra.    
   
You were skinny, arms bony and legs gangly,    
all skeletal angles and points.    
   
You were a slippery mouth with a wet double jointed tongue,    
that swallowed my cum.    
   
Your mop head's hair, never combed, much less fixed,    
made good handles to hold your mouth around my cock.    
   
Your eyes were out of a cartoon, shadowed like a raccoon,  
one green and one blue.    
   
Your fingers were anorexic, without the grip of a noodle,    
barely good to stroke me before I entered you.    
   
Your ass was something to grip with my hands,    
as I unload my cum inside you.    
   
That's why I ignored you when I was with my guys.    
   
So why did it shatter my heart, cause me to sink to my knees,    
and wish I could die?    
   
When you walked out of my life, with a tear in your eye,    
and whispered over your shoulder,    
"I loved you."
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