Poetry competition CLOSED 19th November 2017 8:44pm
WINNER
Jadedembers (Starving demons)
Jadedembers (Starving demons)
RUNNER-UP:
Jade-Pandora
SHUT YOUR MOUTH
Poetry Contest Description
your best Pain (band) inspired poetry
The band, Pain, is the brainchild of Hypocrisy frontman Peter Tagtgren. While Hypocrisy is mainly metal, Pain sounds a little more catchier and is mainly alien themed metal. Give me your best Pain inspired poetry. If you are not too familiar with Pain I will supply some YouTube links.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ThfxYG3m_X4
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lF5bVCDpYMM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5KEGp0aQSEs
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WgPqw0IS1Gw
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=94Q7bp9lDW8
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wSdFFougjr0
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gi0xjjbeUUw
TWO WEEKS
MAX TWO ENTIRES PER POET
NEW WRITES
NO COLLABS
STRUCTURE YOUR WORK
EDIT YOUR WORK
WIPE YOUR OWN ASS
AND SHUT YOUR MOUTH
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ThfxYG3m_X4
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lF5bVCDpYMM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5KEGp0aQSEs
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WgPqw0IS1Gw
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=94Q7bp9lDW8
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wSdFFougjr0
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gi0xjjbeUUw
TWO WEEKS
MAX TWO ENTIRES PER POET
NEW WRITES
NO COLLABS
STRUCTURE YOUR WORK
EDIT YOUR WORK
WIPE YOUR OWN ASS
AND SHUT YOUR MOUTH
Leave me alone
Your demons and evils always haunting me
In my dreams they torture me makes me moan
It ain't me you're looking for hear my plea
Leave me alone...
Even when I'm awake you follow me
Like a shadow you follow me day and night
Why?
Why won't you just leave me alone?
Your whispers and sinister plots keeps ringing in my head
Don't mess with my head, now I can't call it my own..
It drives me insane, I can't go to bed
My dreams are always the same
Inside it, you spin out of control
You call it just a game-
With my life, my sanity you stole
I don't know what your demons are telling you
But your spells have worked, I became framed by lust
Now I'm clueless of what to do
Never sleep with your enemies even if you must...
Your demons and evils always haunting me
In my dreams they torture me makes me moan
It ain't me you're looking for hear my plea
Leave me alone...
Even when I'm awake you follow me
Like a shadow you follow me day and night
Why?
Why won't you just leave me alone?
Your whispers and sinister plots keeps ringing in my head
Don't mess with my head, now I can't call it my own..
It drives me insane, I can't go to bed
My dreams are always the same
Inside it, you spin out of control
You call it just a game-
With my life, my sanity you stole
I don't know what your demons are telling you
But your spells have worked, I became framed by lust
Now I'm clueless of what to do
Never sleep with your enemies even if you must...
You're welcome, it's my pleasure..!
I do enjoy metal, but never heard of them, thank you for introducing me to them..! I find their contents interesting...wiki says that their topics on the songs often is about aliens..?
It's really cool..!
I just hope no one else replies so I can win this haha
I do enjoy metal, but never heard of them, thank you for introducing me to them..! I find their contents interesting...wiki says that their topics on the songs often is about aliens..?
It's really cool..!
I just hope no one else replies so I can win this haha
Chiyo said:Thank You :-)! Then I'll give it a try. Right now:
Cotton candy smile
Sickly sweet and glutinous
False words caught for good
Inspired by Marti Webb - "Take that look off your face"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EtxPMvafqbE
While I appreciate your entry, Chiyo, I am afraid this is a non-entry. Don't get me wrong, your offering was excellent, but this comp is for poetry inspired by the band PAIN. Thank you again for showcasing your ink.
Cotton candy smile
Sickly sweet and glutinous
False words caught for good
Inspired by Marti Webb - "Take that look off your face"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EtxPMvafqbE
While I appreciate your entry, Chiyo, I am afraid this is a non-entry. Don't get me wrong, your offering was excellent, but this comp is for poetry inspired by the band PAIN. Thank you again for showcasing your ink.
This is an entry inspired by "Fade Away" by the band PAIN for HadesRising's DUP competition "SHUT YOUR MOUTH".
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