romance
diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
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StephenPaul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
42
Joined 18th Dec 2009Forum Posts: 1704
Since You Stepped Outside
You come to me
in full exaltation
A new age reminder of -
an ancient incarnation
You're the smoke of inner fire
in full relation
You're the pitch of upper note
my full exclamation
My highest, my full blown , my happiest
revelation
I'll comprehend the unimaginable
To you, I'll give not lend-
all that is tangible
Romany, nomadic
in the temples of your mind
I'll lie in those attics
with you
and then unwind
I kneel in your
emotional church
I don't pray, I feel
my life
get reimbursed
as all dreams
turn real
and spend their worth.
You're the shadow
that remained in my reflection
I changed , never the same , again
you're my
perfection.
The universe is re-aligning
the sky then bursts
after it cracks , from the lightning
we lie under
the planets colliding
we are immersed
in the dust
of the higher plains .
Even if you don't hear
what I say
my words will take a lift
and always find a way
I see the picturesque
countryside
but it all looks like
a mess
since you
have
stepped outside .
You come to me
in full exaltation
A new age reminder of -
an ancient incarnation
You're the smoke of inner fire
in full relation
You're the pitch of upper note
my full exclamation
My highest, my full blown , my happiest
revelation
I'll comprehend the unimaginable
To you, I'll give not lend-
all that is tangible
Romany, nomadic
in the temples of your mind
I'll lie in those attics
with you
and then unwind
I kneel in your
emotional church
I don't pray, I feel
my life
get reimbursed
as all dreams
turn real
and spend their worth.
You're the shadow
that remained in my reflection
I changed , never the same , again
you're my
perfection.
The universe is re-aligning
the sky then bursts
after it cracks , from the lightning
we lie under
the planets colliding
we are immersed
in the dust
of the higher plains .
Even if you don't hear
what I say
my words will take a lift
and always find a way
I see the picturesque
countryside
but it all looks like
a mess
since you
have
stepped outside .
Canullia
canulliaqt
Joined 18th Mar 2017
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canulliaqt
Lost Thinker
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Canullia
canulliaqt
Joined 18th Mar 2017
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canulliaqt
Lost Thinker
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Canullia
canulliaqt
Joined 18th Mar 2017
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canulliaqt
Lost Thinker
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sirBoring
Joined 31st Oct 2016
Forum Posts: 143
Thought Provoker
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i've determined winners. i will start posting comments on each requesting poem and afterwards announce those winners
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archetype23
Forum Posts: 3672
Tyrant of Words
7
Joined 5th Oct 2013Forum Posts: 3672
Wow, thank you Sir boring for the award and for hosting the competition. I enjoyed reading the entries
sirBoring
Joined 31st Oct 2016
Forum Posts: 143
Thought Provoker
Forum Posts: 143
AEMelia564 and archetype23, your poems spoke for themselves. good romance in your works. thanks for participating.