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bastardofbodom666 (Helvete Blod)
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The You Choose Challenge

lashawnscott92
Visual Lyricist
Thought Provoker
United States
Joined 7th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 77

Poetry Contest

Write an erotic poem about something you consider taboo, or an anger poem about heartbreak, or a gorey dark poem or a humorous poem in any genre.
Ok, Lately I haven't seen many posts to alot of the thread challenges. It's saddening, so I always try to think of something everyone likes.

This challenge is designed for you, choose from any category below and write a poem for it. Be sure to follow the stipulations with each though, gotta keep it interesting

Categories
~An Erotic poem lines about something you consider taboo or have always wanted to try

~An anger poem expressing the anger someone or you yourself could feel after having your heart broken

~A dark poem containing alot of gore and as much detail as possible.

~A humorous poem using any genre of poetry you like, poking fun at what ever your topic is


This will give me alot of choices and alot to judge. I will choose a winner July 9th (The date will be pushed to an earlier date if this thread doesn't recieve many post)

CruelHandedWriter
Jamie Rhodes
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 8awards
Joined 20th Sep 2009
Forum Posts: 1426

"Keep it down
for Christ's sake,
if he catches us
you're a dead man...
There is no way I co..."

Her last word reversed
in to a restrained cry
as he slowly entered her.
He observed her bite
down on her lower lip
which sent his hands
around her buttocks
and pushed her against him.

She removed her teeth from her lip
and sank them in to his neck.
He had wanted this for too long
to consider the pain.

He wrapped his hand in her hair
and pulled her head back.
Staring in to her diamond bright eyes
he saw himself:

The bearded brute,
grunting in to the ear of innocence.
Her white socks pressed against his lower back.
There was not a single sign of pain
anywhere on her face,
just the kind of skin
you see in the adverts.

She pushed her tongue in to his mouth
as he watched himself
feeling older.
She weighed no more than a guitar
or a family roast.

She believed that he was watching her
as she reached climax,
but he was observing himself:
This animal he no longer knew
kneeling at the feet of his desire.

He came inside her
and held her there
whilst tears fell from his eyes.
She felt one land
on her tiny breast
and looked up at him:

They had found their love
albeit forbidden
to the darkest recesses
of hidden truths

rayheinrich
Death Plane for Teddy
Tyrant of Words
Canada 32awards
Joined 4th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 4409


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< Human differences and similarities hint at a method for engendering world peace  >


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opheliac
Dangerous Mind
9awards
Joined 29th Aug 2009
Forum Posts: 2122

[quote]no pun intended said:

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< Human differences and similarities hint at a method for engendering world peace  >


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BreakingSpirit212
BreakingSpirit
Twisted Dreamer
United States 2awards
Joined 1st Jan 2011
Forum Posts: 38

My Little Secret

Across the room
you stood, shyly watching
as everyone danced.
Gathering courage
I slid my way through the  
crowd to you.
The question burning  
on my lips, bursting out
of my mouth.
Startled, your eyes seduced
me to the floor.
 
Dancing;
together, alone.
Everyone faded away,  
leaving us to our fantasy.
I wrapped my arms around
your slim shoulders,
my head rested upon
your chest.
When I looked up
our eyes connected.
Leaning foreward,
our lips met.
 
The bed calls us,
beckons from where
it stands alone in the dark.
Slipping under the covers
we lay, an entanglement
of soft limbs
and curves.
 
Slowly you reach over,
stroking my breasts,
teasing my nipples.
You crawl on top
leaning down and caressing
my mouth with yours.
You hands slip under  
my shirt, cupping my breasts;
I reciprocate.  
 
Sliding downwards,
you unbutton my pants
and toss them to the floor.
You stand as I help you  
remove yours
leaving us both in
vulnerable  exposure.
 
My hands find your
clitoris, teasing, causing  
you to cry out.
My fingers slide into
your wet vagina,
you moan first with pain,
then only pleasure.
 
I begin slowly, increasing
as you become more aroused.
Dipping down my mouth  
joins my hands,
my tongue strokes your clit.  
Moaning with euphoria,
you climax.
 
Clinging to my body
you throw me down
on the bed,
stroking my breasts;
tantalizing my clit.
My muscles contract
and hips thrust when I  
finally orgasm in your arms.

poet Anonymous

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bastardofbodom666
Helvete Blod
Fire of Insight
United States 5awards
Joined 6th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 804

"~A dark poem containing alot of gore and as much detail as possible. "

:O you are on my friend hehehehe *turns on Cannibal Corpse, Deicide, Decapitated, and Dying Fetus*

poet Anonymous

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beautiful_accident
Fire of Insight
United States 20awards
Joined 21st June 2011
Forum Posts: 330

Domination

Frayed nylon rope wrapped tight on your wrists, boy
You are my bitch now, my fucktoy, my playground
My tongue gliding down your bare chest, stomach, cock
Love the way you taste; salt and Dial soap
You moan and move your hips; I wrap my lips around you

This isn't a sweet surprise; no nice sunday ride
It's a slap across the face to put you in your place
I love to make the mark that makes you mine
Sink my teeth into a copper penny dial soap shoulder
The way you wince; my name dripping in your pain
My teeth are your infection, my affection
my finger slips into my wet hole
then into your mouth, lucky to taste my nectar
you deserve your tongue in my ass
but tonight I'm not in the mood

I move over you, hover over you
your eyes closed; you'd love it if I'd shove it in
but these are my rules and you need a tease
the way my pussy needs the friction
I go down hard and shove your cock in
my nails bite your open chest, roads
that lead back and forth as I ride it in
over again

In my pleasure I don't see your
wrists wriggling free

You slamming down on top of me
I'm not in charge anymore
I've gone back to being your whore


poet Anonymous

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Gg78
Tyrant of Words
United States 26awards
Joined 5th Mar 2011
Forum Posts: 9051

Two left shoes one lace
What a freaking disgrace 
I'm in school already what do I do
Hop to the next class 
Pretend to fall on my ass 
Maybe take this shoe throw at goodie too-shoe sue 
Everyone will Laugh at her while I run for math 
And hide in there with good ole mister bass 
He won't judge my shoe dilemma 
He might just make me lay on his coach wrapped in a sweater 
Idk if that's a good idea 
Everyone will think I'm sick with fear
I should just go home for the day 
Why not school sucks anyway
 


My shoe dilemma

lashawnscott92
Visual Lyricist
Thought Provoker
United States
Joined 7th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 77

REALLY enjoying the entries so far. so much diversity among each writers poem and techniques. Keep  them coming and invite other people if possible.

poet Anonymous

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Kameron
Thought Provoker
United States 4awards
Joined 8th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 165

Anger/Love/...in HAIKU FORM!

Clenched hands by my side
all I could do was sigh over
and over again.

My heart ached like blood
dripping down my knuckles hold
my hand, ghost is all

You will find in time
because this broke us, choke us
I will be happy!

beautiful_accident
Fire of Insight
United States 20awards
Joined 21st June 2011
Forum Posts: 330

Dahlia

Sick with arousal, cock engorged to massive
Excited by the potential in her
She's a pretty bitch, but I make her beautiful
Few sweet words my starlet harlot is on her knees
my fist in her hair; my cock jammed in her willing throat
Pull her in and she gags on my explosion
Reach back my fist and punch the cum out of her mouth
Stupid whore bitch user abuser
Wouldn't give me the time of day if I didn't lie

She drools saliva and blood down her lolling mouth
True beauty is in desecration; tie hands legs tight
Her eyes start to flutter and she realizes her danger
Too late bitch, I squat on her face; gag her in feces
She screams through my shit; punch her fucking face again
Put my mouth over her budding tit, tastes so good
I bite the fucking thing off spit it out
Punch her stupid ass again; slice her stupid lolling throat
She gags more, shit blood cum ooze down her restrained body
Finally she falls quiet; I drain her blood
rip her top from her bottom; disjointed barbie doll screaming shit
mouth frozen in fear and pain

I drag her to the boulevard; she'd be selling herself,
But no one will buy what's left of her
She wanted fame now no one will forget her
Her face will haunt the masses
I rip off part of her thigh
Shove it into her rigor frozen dead pussy
Get in my car and leave her just as I found her
But true beauty is in the circle that life poses
So she is as she was
Lifeless, bloodless, naked, broken, and full of herself

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