Nothing New Under The Sun
JessePhoenix
Jessica Paterson
Joined 7th June 2016
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Jessica Paterson
Lost Thinker
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Wow tragic, beautiful, simple. I love it.
afriendoftina
Hendy
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Hendy
Twisted Dreamer
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Fleeting Champion
Creating the new? The Alchemist responds:
newwhatdoyoumeansomethingnewbrandnewthatsoundsimpossibleimpossiblewhatachallengetosetbeforeusiguessthisiswheretherealavantgardewriterscomeforwardfirstforwardbutiponderasolutionseekthatsolutionandheresthenuggetofgoldthatimcapableofunearthingdiggingupfromtheearthwhatimwritingisnewbutnotinthewayyoumightthinkiamsuggestingsuggestingtoyouiknowpeoplehaveruntheirletterstogetherjammedwithoutspacesnospacesbetweenwordsbutnoonehaswrittenthisnonsensewordbeforenotpresciselynotpreciselythiswordthiswordisnewitsnewbutitswrittennowsonowitsolddrat.
The Alchemist achieved it. Success and Hurrah,
For a moment, just one moment, a fraction of time.
Such a shame that only the alchemist knew of his genius discovery,
A shame, felt by him alone, felt as alone as that feeling of new.
Eureka! He's figured it: if you read it, you felt it, you've experienced new too,
But experience is past tense, it's over for you: what's new is not new!?
The formula can be repeated, it can be redone, redone and redone,
So the newness is endless but it's so fleeting, with each redone - newness gone.
Go ahead, copy him and countless others, copy them,
Go ahead, copy him and countless others copy them,
The Alchemist did discover the formula for newness... Quick! STOP the press!
Darn! Too late! Drat! He's missed his chance of fame, he's old news now.
Typical. The alchemist is ever always such a fleeting champion.
But to grant a trophy of permanency would be something new...?
The Alchemist waits patiently.
Creating the new? The Alchemist responds:
newwhatdoyoumeansomethingnewbrandnewthatsoundsimpossibleimpossiblewhatachallengetosetbeforeusiguessthisiswheretherealavantgardewriterscomeforwardfirstforwardbutiponderasolutionseekthatsolutionandheresthenuggetofgoldthatimcapableofunearthingdiggingupfromtheearthwhatimwritingisnewbutnotinthewayyoumightthinkiamsuggestingsuggestingtoyouiknowpeoplehaveruntheirletterstogetherjammedwithoutspacesnospacesbetweenwordsbutnoonehaswrittenthisnonsensewordbeforenotpresciselynotpreciselythiswordthiswordisnewitsnewbutitswrittennowsonowitsolddrat.
The Alchemist achieved it. Success and Hurrah,
For a moment, just one moment, a fraction of time.
Such a shame that only the alchemist knew of his genius discovery,
A shame, felt by him alone, felt as alone as that feeling of new.
Eureka! He's figured it: if you read it, you felt it, you've experienced new too,
But experience is past tense, it's over for you: what's new is not new!?
The formula can be repeated, it can be redone, redone and redone,
So the newness is endless but it's so fleeting, with each redone - newness gone.
Go ahead, copy him and countless others, copy them,
Go ahead, copy him and countless others copy them,
The Alchemist did discover the formula for newness... Quick! STOP the press!
Darn! Too late! Drat! He's missed his chance of fame, he's old news now.
Typical. The alchemist is ever always such a fleeting champion.
But to grant a trophy of permanency would be something new...?
The Alchemist waits patiently.
crimsin
Unveiling
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Unveiling
Tyrant of Words
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thank you afriendtoftina great entry..
case28
Alexander Case
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Alexander Case
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 16th June 2013Forum Posts: 2084
alter: standby love
when the airlock depressurised
the scent of sickness engulfed me
nova was home
i knew she'd come back
curled up naked
toying with her essence
regurgitated on the floor
lush addiction was sickening
it always led to something primitive
but not tonight
the mercury teardrop
streaming down her tattooed cheek
spoke to me: kinetic-telepathy
or perhaps
it was the cyanide
leaching from her perfumed skin
she said: we can't play make believe anymore
her voice resonated in my skull
yet her lips had not mouthed a single word
i traced her everlasting breath
watched the silver thread of light
fade in her eyes
and in that moment
nova was gone
but this time she wasn't coming back
her memory
erased from the cloud
her body
an empty cocoon pulsating arctic-blue light
a vacancy sign to a blank space
for another alter to fill
Written by Alexander Case
shannonJane
Lost poet - Day dreamer
Joined 30th Apr 2014
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Lost poet - Day dreamer
Thought Provoker
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Under the sun I feel your glow again.
nothing new really , you always lit up my world. In life or death.
Under the sun I remember your last dance , our last kiss.
Under the sun ...nothing new.
Your sucide has left me as blue as the sky that sits by your side.
I will always love you.
Nothing new under the sun.
I can be your blue sky , you can be my sunshine.
You keep me light in the day and at night when you go away , I sleep to dream of your face.
nothing new really , you always lit up my world. In life or death.
Under the sun I remember your last dance , our last kiss.
Under the sun ...nothing new.
Your sucide has left me as blue as the sky that sits by your side.
I will always love you.
Nothing new under the sun.
I can be your blue sky , you can be my sunshine.
You keep me light in the day and at night when you go away , I sleep to dream of your face.
crimsin
Unveiling
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Unveiling
Tyrant of Words
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thank you to all who entered you really brought your all
Congratulations Mr. Case and Craic for awesome entries
Congratulations Mr. Case and Craic for awesome entries
case28
Alexander Case
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Alexander Case
Dangerous Mind
42
Joined 16th June 2013Forum Posts: 2084
Thanks Crim. You're always a super host[age]... and great idea for a comp. Congrats to Craic and poets who had a crack, there were some blistering entries here, well done!
Artemios
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Thought Provoker
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Congrats to Case and Craic! it was a very tough comp.!
Congrats to all the poets for great pieces here.
Thank you Crimsin for this sunny comp!
Art
Congrats to all the poets for great pieces here.
Thank you Crimsin for this sunny comp!
Art