Poetry competition CLOSED 14th June 2016 4:16am
WINNER
case28 (Alexander Case)
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RUNNER-UP: lepperochan

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Nothing New Under The Sun

JessePhoenix
Jessica Paterson
Lost Thinker
Australia
Joined 7th June 2016
Forum Posts: 6

Wow tragic, beautiful, simple. I love it.

afriendoftina
Hendy
Twisted Dreamer
United Kingdom 5awards
Joined 21st Apr 2016
Forum Posts: 73

Fleeting Champion

Creating the new? The Alchemist responds:

newwhatdoyoumeansomethingnewbrandnewthatsoundsimpossibleimpossiblewhatachallengetosetbeforeusiguessthisiswheretherealavantgardewriterscomeforwardfirstforwardbutiponderasolutionseekthatsolutionandheresthenuggetofgoldthatimcapableofunearthingdiggingupfromtheearthwhatimwritingisnewbutnotinthewayyoumightthinkiamsuggestingsuggestingtoyouiknowpeoplehaveruntheirletterstogetherjammedwithoutspacesnospacesbetweenwordsbutnoonehaswrittenthisnonsensewordbeforenotpresciselynotpreciselythiswordthiswordisnewitsnewbutitswrittennowsonowitsolddrat.

The Alchemist achieved it. Success and Hurrah,
For a moment, just one moment, a fraction of time.

Such a shame that only the alchemist knew of his genius discovery,
A shame, felt by him alone, felt as alone as that feeling of new.

Eureka! He's figured it: if you read it, you felt it, you've experienced new too,
But experience is past tense, it's over for you: what's new is not new!?

The formula can be repeated, it can be redone, redone and redone,
So the newness is endless but it's so fleeting, with each redone - newness gone.

Go ahead, copy him and countless others, copy them,
Go ahead, copy him and countless others copy them,

The Alchemist did discover the formula for newness... Quick! STOP the press!
Darn! Too late! Drat! He's missed his chance of fame, he's old news now.

Typical. The alchemist is ever always such a fleeting champion.
But to grant a trophy of permanency would be something new...?

The Alchemist waits patiently.

crimsin
Unveiling
Tyrant of Words
United States 126awards
Joined 25th Jan 2011
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thank you afriendtoftina great entry..

case28
Alexander Case
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 16th June 2013
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alter: standby love


when the airlock depressurised
the scent of sickness engulfed me  
nova was home
i knew she'd come back


curled up naked
toying with her essence  
regurgitated on the floor
lush addiction was sickening
it always led to something primitive
but not tonight


the mercury teardrop
streaming down her tattooed cheek
spoke to me: kinetic-telepathy
or perhaps
it was the cyanide
leaching from her perfumed skin


she said: we can't play make believe anymore
her voice resonated in my skull
yet her lips had not mouthed a single word


i traced her everlasting breath
watched the silver thread of light
fade in her eyes
and in that moment
nova was gone
but this time she wasn't coming back


her memory
erased from the cloud
her body
an empty cocoon pulsating arctic-blue light
a vacancy sign to a blank space
for another alter to fill



Written by Alexander Case

shannonJane
Lost poet - Day dreamer
Thought Provoker
Joined 30th Apr 2014
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Under the sun I feel your glow again.
nothing new really , you always lit up my world. In life or death.
Under the sun I remember your last dance , our last kiss.
Under the sun ...nothing new.
Your sucide has left me as blue as the sky that sits by your side.
I will always love you.
Nothing new under the sun.
I can be your blue sky , you can be my sunshine.
You keep me light in the day and at night when you go away , I sleep to dream of your face.

crimsin
Unveiling
Tyrant of Words
United States 126awards
Joined 25th Jan 2011
Forum Posts: 2661

thank you to all who entered you really brought your all

Congratulations Mr. Case and Craic for awesome entries

case28
Alexander Case
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 16th June 2013
Forum Posts: 2084

Thanks Crim. You're always a super host[age]... and great idea for a comp. Congrats to Craic and poets who had a crack, there were some blistering entries here, well done!

Artemios
Thought Provoker
Greece 12awards
Joined 11th Jan 2016
Forum Posts: 393

Congrats to Case and Craic! it was a very tough comp.!
Congrats to all the poets for great pieces here.

Thank you Crimsin for this sunny comp!

Art

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