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Poetry competition CLOSED 26th February 2016 6:34pm
WINNER
Pho3nix19xx
Pho3nix19xx
RUNNERS-UP:
AlexnEmoLand
and SatansSperm
What do you see?
Poetry Contest Description
It can be anything except the the female parts and the man parts. Lets step outside that box. Make me see through your eyes what you think is disturbingly hideous or profoundly beautiful.
No collaborations
Not too long please
New ones only
You may enter one poem. No pictures. The idea is to make me see it.
No nonsense poems please. Be serious.
2 weeks
Its my first comp, so go easy on me if I didnt do it right! Im a comp virgin, yes I am And you can swear and stuff in said poems, I dont know how to make it that way....mail me and I will. XXX ~ML
Not too long please
New ones only
You may enter one poem. No pictures. The idea is to make me see it.
No nonsense poems please. Be serious.
2 weeks
Its my first comp, so go easy on me if I didnt do it right! Im a comp virgin, yes I am And you can swear and stuff in said poems, I dont know how to make it that way....mail me and I will. XXX ~ML
Fucken Nothing
Seldom spoken
Neither very ever heard
The words that came to me today from the plain misunderstanding of the monkeys in the tree
How many fuckers can you hang in one tree?
The number 33 came to me
The seldom spoken words of another story
From the mysterious upbringing of the occult
The supernatural
The spirits
The functionality of the things you know not about
You wanna come dance beneath the stars of the moonlight sky with me?
Or would you rather hang outside beneath the tree
Discluded
Disguising yourself because it's like sending the flowers to the girl or the man you'd like to fuck but you can't because you are too timid and shy to show and reveal what you are.
Egoristic
You you you you like me?
Well when it comes to it
Figments flop
Faggots fuck
Anal re-tentative sons of bitches want to get to it
Left without the doubt
The attack is all about
Gaining the knowledge of therefore the existence of being of a nothing will be plain to be when it comes to the big picture of you inside my tree
Cause i'd like to be a beetle all inside your tree
Gaining what?
Smoke the bowl
Roll it around
Like the mind frame
Egotistical driven
Societally expected to be what you are
So thank you for continually being a star
What will it be when it comes to the picture of you inside my mind
I think maybe
Maggots filled
Cold
That's what i wanna fuck
Seldom spoken
Neither very ever heard
The words that came to me today from the plain misunderstanding of the monkeys in the tree
How many fuckers can you hang in one tree?
The number 33 came to me
The seldom spoken words of another story
From the mysterious upbringing of the occult
The supernatural
The spirits
The functionality of the things you know not about
You wanna come dance beneath the stars of the moonlight sky with me?
Or would you rather hang outside beneath the tree
Discluded
Disguising yourself because it's like sending the flowers to the girl or the man you'd like to fuck but you can't because you are too timid and shy to show and reveal what you are.
Egoristic
You you you you like me?
Well when it comes to it
Figments flop
Faggots fuck
Anal re-tentative sons of bitches want to get to it
Left without the doubt
The attack is all about
Gaining the knowledge of therefore the existence of being of a nothing will be plain to be when it comes to the big picture of you inside my tree
Cause i'd like to be a beetle all inside your tree
Gaining what?
Smoke the bowl
Roll it around
Like the mind frame
Egotistical driven
Societally expected to be what you are
So thank you for continually being a star
What will it be when it comes to the picture of you inside my mind
I think maybe
Maggots filled
Cold
That's what i wanna fuck
Rarely on, here is another one just because the other is Long
I've seen the beast who arrives and thrives I've seen the beast destroy good lives
I've seen the beast who bears no eyes
He lives inside while one battles for life
He'll halt the mind and torment the soul
He's inside one and all yet so few of us claim to know
Bear the burden heavy and slow from those you know
Don't let this beast grow and surely know!
I've seen the beast who arrives and thrives I've seen the beast destroy good lives
I've seen the beast who bears no eyes
He lives inside while one battles for life
He'll halt the mind and torment the soul
He's inside one and all yet so few of us claim to know
Bear the burden heavy and slow from those you know
Don't let this beast grow and surely know!
Walking....
I went for a walk today
with a girl who has a soul
as pure
as a snowflake
delicate & unique
beautiful
in her brilliance
she would dance
in the sunlight
a kaleidoscope of colors
like a ballet
performed by rainbows
or a recital
of the sunrise
in the wind
you could hear her voice
like a liquid lilting lullaby
sung to babies
by angels
I went for a walk today
with a girl who has a soul
as pure
as a snowflake
delicate & unique
beautiful
in her brilliance
she would dance
in the sunlight
a kaleidoscope of colors
like a ballet
performed by rainbows
or a recital
of the sunrise
in the wind
you could hear her voice
like a liquid lilting lullaby
sung to babies
by angels
My Golden Boy
I see a man
A beautiful man..
Of Buddha nature coutanence
And blue gleam eyes that twinkle peculiar
and you see in them...
An old soul and his search for truth and knowledge of the ages
His feet make his own path righteously
and though his trail was some suffering
He blazed through dark wood brave
Understanding each step made
was a good trade hardship
And a good man became great man
On his journey to live life and aquire gain through spiritual awakening...
And he offers me his hand though mine trembles ...
Take it he says with a smile soothing with my faith in him
I glad grasp it my confidence in bloom
Yes my Orchid he says now we walk together always..
As we watch with eyes wide open
Watch the great secrets of life unfold
like a breathtaking sunrise
We are lovers full with pure of heart desire
And together any thing discovered
A profound treasure
I see a man
A beautiful man..
Of Buddha nature coutanence
And blue gleam eyes that twinkle peculiar
and you see in them...
An old soul and his search for truth and knowledge of the ages
His feet make his own path righteously
and though his trail was some suffering
He blazed through dark wood brave
Understanding each step made
was a good trade hardship
And a good man became great man
On his journey to live life and aquire gain through spiritual awakening...
And he offers me his hand though mine trembles ...
Take it he says with a smile soothing with my faith in him
I glad grasp it my confidence in bloom
Yes my Orchid he says now we walk together always..
As we watch with eyes wide open
Watch the great secrets of life unfold
like a breathtaking sunrise
We are lovers full with pure of heart desire
And together any thing discovered
A profound treasure
Trevor...really liked your piece..
but ###otts such an offensive word...
does it have to be used? As a bi lesbian
its offensive...unless its meant in another form...dont know where you are from....this isnt a judgement i swear..no anger or sarcasm ...just a question...food for thought.
but ###otts such an offensive word...
does it have to be used? As a bi lesbian
its offensive...unless its meant in another form...dont know where you are from....this isnt a judgement i swear..no anger or sarcasm ...just a question...food for thought.
ItsUpToU said:Here is an improve for you from a while ago
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ye2KmaiXtX0
This was a trip..and interesting...but hardly understandable because of the mask you were wearingdo you have it written?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ye2KmaiXtX0
This was a trip..and interesting...but hardly understandable because of the mask you were wearingdo you have it written?
Whole new day of judgment
I've come to believe beauty is a state of mind. lost count of how many times my eyes or ears or nose said:
"ok, yesterday there may have been an implication of less than beautiful, but on further examination, spurred by the new-found elation apparent, we feel the earlier judgment was erroneous"
could be a music, a voice, a face, a tree, a fat tom cat, a hurricane, a flower..
that said
what was beautiful yesterday
may not be again
til next time
perception goes arse over tit
beauty is a complex motherfucker
that's ugly as sin
I've come to believe beauty is a state of mind. lost count of how many times my eyes or ears or nose said:
"ok, yesterday there may have been an implication of less than beautiful, but on further examination, spurred by the new-found elation apparent, we feel the earlier judgment was erroneous"
could be a music, a voice, a face, a tree, a fat tom cat, a hurricane, a flower..
that said
what was beautiful yesterday
may not be again
til next time
perception goes arse over tit
beauty is a complex motherfucker
that's ugly as sin
